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Description: One of my Halloween party outfits this year...my spin off of Akasha Queen Of The Damned.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Estelle[ akasha skin ] 
bySinderellabyYannomi
4299499

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

F| Saniyah Black[M] Wishful Eyes. allie no lash+
byFinebyMissMayabyZephyr
636455987

Clothes

1 Duplicate1 DuplicateShoes

[DM] Layerable B[Ry] Tuiwnis Dar Bloody Feet
byDarkMaldbySahbaAntarbyVuho
699581499

Accessories

TiarasScalerGlovesSkins & TattooMiscellaneousFace Paint

Di Legno :i: CROHand Scaler 75%[M]Bloody HandsB| AnySkin ContoA heart in your []-MaleficentBro
byIconicDollbyScalerbyModbybakonebyVelvetNoctisbyBeaty
658419665530650499

Face PaintFace PaintCapeEyeLashes

Dribble of Lust ���Allie| Vampire ~E- Avlynn ShawlAllie Lashes - G
byMistressMortibySinHavenbyEllohymbySyrenaAzul
757621666559

This is a neat idea and you executed it well. But there are a few things that need to be fixed. You're missing a shoulder scaler, your shoulder should be 90 to 95%. And the layerable blood has a lot of glitches, it causes part of your top to disappear and it glitches with your skirt. The chains also glitch into her shoulders and her arms. The texture on the crown is copy and pasted, and it glitches with your head and hair. Your eyelashes also glitch with your eyebrows. When using layerable makeup, you need to use eyebrows that are specifically made for KD heads to avoid glitching.

B+

I really have to agree with Frightful on this one. As cool as this outfit is, there's just far too much glitching going on for it to be passable. Finding a skin that's got the blood already on it, rather than going with the layerable, would be a huge step in the right direction.

B+

This is super cool. Unfortunately, I also agree with Fright.

B+

So cool
Fix a few issues and this will be great

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : SinHaven  : 1755           |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1755.

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Description: Second attempt.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Estelle[ akasha skin ] 
bySinderellabyYannomi
4299499

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

F| Saniyah Black[M] Wishful Eyes. allie no lash+
byFinebyMissMayabyZephyr
636455987

Clothes

1 DuplicateShoes

[Ry] Tuiwnis Dar Bloody Feet
bySahbaAntarbyVuho
581499

Accessories

crownsScalerScalerGlovesSkins & TattooMiscellaneous

Princess CrownHand Scaler 75%Shoulder Scaler [M]Bloody HandsB| AnySkin ContoA heart in your 
byMsImpressivebyScalerbyScalerbyModbybakonebyVelvetNoctis
696419448665530650

Face PaintFace PaintFace PaintCape

[]-MaleficentBroDribble of Lust �Allie| Vampire ~E- Avlynn Shawl
byBeatybyMistressMortibySinHavenbyEllohym
499757621666

I noticed there is a glitch from the eyebrows through eyelashes but this is very minor thing. Otherwise, I have no issues.

A

They glitch because, as mentioned in the original critique, they weren't designed to go with this head. It's always a good idea to listen to critiques from your original entry, lest you end up getting points docked for the exact same problems, later on.

The crown you opted to change to is pretty dated in my opinion. It's got that classic '07 era, "If I make it sparkle, that makes it metal," look about it. There's no actual texturing to it.

There are some things I really like, though. The added contouring makes a huge difference in the face and really makes this lean more toward a horror sort of look. And I do like the mesh you chose for the crown, because it really suits the hair (I think the glitching between the two is very easily overlooked - you're not likely to find hair and crown that don't glitch at all at the base and still look good).

I do miss the blood on the rest of the body. It sort of feels like it doesn't quite make sense without it, because she's otherwise so very messy with it. And her dress being absolutely immaculate stands out a bit, too.

But, I think the pros outweigh the cons, overall, and this is worth passing.

A-