November 3, 2016, 9:49 am

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Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Kayla
. Peyton - dark
by
Xuo
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Zephyr
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399
647
Head & Face
HairHair
Eyebrows
Eyes
Head
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Sideburns Layera
Janice Black
[c] Pierce | Cut
$ winter
$ Exotic !!
by
Sadlstic
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Sadlstic
by
Chr0nicCha0s
by
Evz
by
Maertice
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665
665
829
444
987
Clothes
TopBottom
1 Duplicate
Shoes
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power rangers
Tartan Patch-Tre
$ Stretch Jeans
Candy | Berry |
by
Soen
by
Hawaii
by
Amore
by
Hawaii
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862
664
829
Accessories
ScalerActions
Nerd Glasses
Ear Plugs
Facial Jewelry
Chokers
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Shoulder Scaler
Avatar Hands Res
Goff Low Glasse
Owl Plugs Emo
Large Septum
Simple Choker
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Scaler
by
MrsVanessaCit
by
Zombooty
by
ewu
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Zombooty
by
Dexy
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623
569
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Dainty Hands
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Mettalic Nails+
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Dexy
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November 3, 2016, 12:02 pm
I'm not a fan of the coat tbh. You should have used something that didn't glitch with the shoulders so noticeably. The shoes also feel really random thanks to the furry parts of them. I'd change the shoes and change or remove the jacket. Even settling for one of those waist-wrap versions would be better than what the trench coat imo. Personally, I also feel that there's a lot crowding the face. Downgrading the septum and/or removing one of the eyebrow piercing sets would be nice.
Otherwise, I like the model and look forward to what you'll change and how this will turn out.
B+
Otherwise, I like the model and look forward to what you'll change and how this will turn out.
B+
November 3, 2016, 2:07 pm
B
November 4, 2016, 7:25 am
The model is nice. The tee shirt and spectacles are a nice touch but I agree that the shoes are out of place, the jacket clips at the shoulders too badly and the face area is crowded with accessories. Looking forward to seeing how you'll upgrade this.
B+
B+
November 4, 2016, 10:14 am
Agree with iMoo
The dup is so different that I dont really mind it though
B+
The dup is so different that I dont really mind it though
B+
November 4, 2016, 10:20 am

B+
87.79 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : iMoo     : Judge | | B : SinHaven : 1755 | | B+ : Ajak     : 1560 | | B+ : Frightful : Judge | | B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge |
Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 86.57 % ( B ) with an average rating weight of 1658.