November 6, 2016, 6:24 pm

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Hey Judges!
My first post, I hope you enjoy my look.
Hopefully I also posted this right
   Please help me if I did anything wrong   Â
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Chyna-$$
   Alia Mid
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Testify_88610
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Pegaso
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Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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B Agu Hairs & Ro
((n) KD black br
[MT] Grace - Ash
[Is] Allie No La
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Benjoi
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nutsbar
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MissMaya
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Ismeny
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498
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888
Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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Eat Me
$ Mine
Platform boots
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Ceeji
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Essme
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lKeiLal
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664
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Accessories
ScalerScaler
Dainty Hands
Earrings
Face Paint
Face Paint
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Hand Scaler 60%
Shoulder Scaler
~A: Black'Chic N
*kn* Sense femal
. allie gyaru ma
[FC] Allie Wine
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Scaler
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Scaler
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lllAdrianalll
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kennyblack
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Zephyr
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FabianaCastel
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Hats
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+ festival sun h
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Casual
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November 6, 2016, 8:40 pm
Kudos on using a hairstyle that's a little different than what I see in the average submission. I like what you were striving for, but I don't think the hat was necessary. It doesn't feel like it actually melds with the rest of the outfit very well. The same goes for the shoes; they're just uber bulky and way too edgy for the vibes I'm gathering from the top and bottoms. I'd focus on bracelets or some other hand/wrist accessory instead of the hat, then just change the shoes to something a little more fitting. And ofc to fix the hand size as mentioned in your other submission.
Great start, though.
B+

B+
November 7, 2016, 1:23 pm

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : iMoo   : Judge | | B+ : Dreta  : Judge | | B+ : Tostito : Judge |