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Description: Second Female avi, i tried to mix bright pastel Colors and Dark ones since is give more uniqueness to an outfit and make the avatar look better, is not one of my best works but i work hard on this one so i can get a better impression on female outfits. Hope you guys like it <|:^D. ( to Frightful: Thanks for the Head :^) )










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

|2' Listen to mu Kawaii020
byVERSbyAko
579499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

A| Nifemi Pastel Garnet EyeBrow.mm. Oracle - V4 //Tae N/L\\
byixAurorabyNaiubyMissMayabyFrightful
779499499999

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

 Anti Social TeeSeifuku; Lilac SPurple Black Dri
byGwuapOneszbySeoulbyBelleLierre
499587650

Accessories

ScalerFace PaintEyeLashes

Combo Scaler S90A| Tae Lips - CaTears
byScalerbyixAurorabyDroll
448691616

I feel that the tears are a bit of a random accessory/detail, here. The top also doesn't seem to have any detail to it; there's no lighting or shading, wrinkles or details...just a print that was pasted on top. I can totally see why you'd want to use it for this theme, but it really isn't the best quality. I'd opt for another top that's dark to help balance this out...black would be a safe bet, even if it had some pastel details/prints etc. on it somewhere. Most likely something that ties in with the skirt a little better than a bomber. Also, pink lips is a bit too much imo. I'd go with black. Last thing...the avi seems a bit random since she's not listening to music. xc

B+

I do agree everything iMoo says.

B+

Completely agree with iMoo. I'll also add: the eyebrows are completely mismatched from the hair. Just because they're not entirely visible doesn't mean you can neglect to match them. Black would be just fine, as this is clearly a dyed color. And the crosses in the hair are completely untextured, too. I'd hunt for a version of the hair with a color you like that has better textured accessories.

B

I understand the hair is suppose to pastel but the contrast is too high on it, there isn't enough shadowing. I also agree the tears are too much and I think the avatar could be better too. I would find better shoes as well, but keep the high socks. Overall there is just too much I would like to see changed.

B

I completely agree with Implex, Sin and Moo.

B+

B+
87.04 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 87.22 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo     : Judge          |
|          B+ : Dreta    : 1816           |
|          B  : SinHaven : 1783           |
|          B  : Implex   : Judge          |
|          B+ : Pjush    : Judge          |

Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 86.68 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1800.

Resub Granted