November 20, 2016, 2:41 pm

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Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Cheri Avatar Tal
Ivana Skin |S|
by
Sinderella
by
Shicuki
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7999
609
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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|Ariel Black
-AK- Freya Brows
Selene-Mortal
Scarla Head
by
MrsKitty
by
AnnieKMZ
by
Roy
by
M0nstre
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663
499
399
987
Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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Hip Hop
A| Ripped - Pas
Pastel Goth
by
Ako
by
ixAurora
by
WHiT
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598
709
603
Accessories
ScalerCollars
Headdresses
New Acces.
Dainty Hands
Wayfers Glasse
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Combo Scaler S90
~L~ Rose Spiked
[Rx] Pink Rose S
KISA|PinkHeartSe
Gypsy Nails
Glasses Pastel
by
Scaler
by
Lalusha
by
VULGARx
by
KisaTheCutie
by
Dexy
by
Uvonie
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November 21, 2016, 8:58 am
Glad to see more people trying the theme.
I think you had the right idea, but this outfit needs a bit of work before reaching the site.
The shoes have no texture. The pants...I'm not sure how the texture turned out like that; nothing seems to be in the right place, though...like the UV map just doesn't match the texture map at all. Accessory-wise, you were grabbing the right sort of things, but maybe too many of them for one area. The theme can get a little cluttered, but the collar and headband don't match each other, and I don't think either one really matches the outfit entirely.
This actually might need a revamp instead of a resub, because I don't think the pants or shoes are passable. Just be careful about what you're using in your outfits and try to be really mindful of textures/quality.
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The shoes have no texture. The pants...I'm not sure how the texture turned out like that; nothing seems to be in the right place, though...like the UV map just doesn't match the texture map at all. Accessory-wise, you were grabbing the right sort of things, but maybe too many of them for one area. The theme can get a little cluttered, but the collar and headband don't match each other, and I don't think either one really matches the outfit entirely.
This actually might need a revamp instead of a resub, because I don't think the pants or shoes are passable. Just be careful about what you're using in your outfits and try to be really mindful of textures/quality.
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