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I really like Demon and Vampire lore and I reflect that heavily in just about every outfit I do. I was going for sort of a modern, young Demon. I don't understand why some items are duplicating...










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Velvet TallSafire med
bySinderellabyKoye
3998697

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

Xandra NeptuneLiiN No Brows (F. glam brow | drXO. SoulMate CleKD^HELEN HEAD
byDrollbyLiiNbyZephyrbyPAPAxobykloudust
663335665664877

Clothes

1 Duplicate1 DuplicateShoes

$ Pure Chained Jeans Rmm. Boots (S)
byEssmebyDexybyMissMaya
576598609

Accessories

TailsElf Ear PierciElf EarsEarringsScalerActions

Horn Silver DemoPierced Elf EarsAnyskin Elf Ears!S! PVC silver eShoulder Scaler Avatar Hands Res
byLillyIsABratbyCannibalFleshbyCannibalFleshbySinfullybyScalerbyMrsVanessaCit
735551584609448499

Skins & TattooDainty HandsHorns

 HENNA tattoo Matte+Mandala I~T~ Luna Horns
bylNiralibyDexybyTigerRains
664598630

If a product has duplicates, it means that it's been used in other submissions. If you see them, definitely check to see if there are any similarities between their outfit and yours. If there are, you'll need to look for a different product or take the outfit in a new direction. Generally, we don't like to see 3+ dups on one product, but fewer are okay...still, if it's a pair of plain black shoes, it'd be better to look for a similar style or another version of that mesh. Thankfully, neither duplicate looks too similar to this, though.

For the most part, this is okay. I'm not super fond of the horns you used because the white looks pretty random amongst everything else...at least, to me. I think this would be better without the demon twist on it, but if you really wanted to include it, I'd go dark. I've seen the elf ears and piercings a few times already, I think--I think they're not really needed here because the hair covers the elf ears, and because you have a piercing set aside from the elf version.

A-

I agree with iMoo on the accessories, but you need to be careful on the dups. Two of the biggest parts of your outfit have duplicates on them, I'm also not really fond of the random PVC boots here. As much as I don't care for the dups, I'd opt to change the shoes for something more fitting. And if you choose to keep the horns, go dark like iMoo said, but lose the circlet, it's way too busy and doesn't go with a look like this.

B+

I do agree with iMoo and Frightful everything they said. I would like to see a dark hairstyle but I think it's more like from my personal preference.

B+

B+
89.44 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 89.44 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : Dreta     : Judge          |

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