November 25, 2016, 9:22 pm

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Description: Submission for Burlesque contest. Used dark colors such as burgundy and black to give the look a sultry, romantic tone x
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Ken Ken - Kendal
IRosa Skin Ivory
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Nigist
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IZIS
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1423
774
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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F. Bingbing Li 5
s| LuaBrows KD.
mm. Jewel. Hazel
!j Yoko head
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Fine
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Scarling
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MissMaya
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Jibrielle
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639
554
499
905
Clothes
Top1 Duplicate
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Crimson Dress
Tom Ford.
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JaneDoeXD
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Powers
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988
605
Accessories
ScalerActions
Gloves
Hats
Chokers
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Combo Scaler S95
Night Light
m> Vintage Lace
Veil, bl.
( Tie a Bow )
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Scaler
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Ori
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Martha
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Gautier
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Martha
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554
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November 26, 2016, 10:18 am
It doesn't look like you used a shadowless room. It's a rule to use one instead of those face/body lights.
The light should actually be removed because it's just an unnecessary product. And I believe that the avi isn't flattering for this outfit, either. The way it bends her torso/stomach is pretty noticeable, and I feel like it's just not flattering to the hips and legs.
F
The light should actually be removed because it's just an unnecessary product. And I believe that the avi isn't flattering for this outfit, either. The way it bends her torso/stomach is pretty noticeable, and I feel like it's just not flattering to the hips and legs.
F
November 26, 2016, 10:20 am

F
50 %
1 judge have voted, the judge average was 50 % ( F )
Grading Breakdown:
| FÂ : iMoo : Judge |
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November 26, 2016, 1:14 pm
I'm going to note, before this is resubbed, that your shoes have a duplicate, which should be avoided where possible (here, I do believe it would be very possible with a simple pair of black pumps) and your arms are scaled, which we discourage. They definitely look too thin, here. The default width for arms is usually fine. Just some extra notes to keep in mind if you choose to resub.