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Description: Welp, its here xD my burlesque male avi hope this fill up expectations because it was very difficult to find the best idea for it, and the chest duplicate imoo said that it was good if i use it. thank you hope you like it










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

 Philip.!! Reflejo Remas
byBalorbyZei
333598

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

!  Hipster HairsEyebrows Realistrz. Left Night EDaniel head.
byPicsbyReutherbyRedezbySynet
697558553987

Clothes

2 DuplicatesBottomShoes

A Perfect Chest Tc-Black JoggersCrown King Kicks
byAdrienellebyBadbrobyMrzLindaEmpir
518608675

Accessories

ScalerCloaksCollarsCuff WatchesCuff WatchesGloves

Combo Scaler S90Jarls WV.PlayBoy Bowtie&.PlayBoy Cuff L.PlayBoy Cuff Rr Perfect Hands.
byScalerbyOrianaDawnsbyISIN13byISIN13byISIN13byRaters
448691771771771553

This is cool. Actually, I am not good at identity the burlesque but I feel like it's not a burlesque enough due to the pants and shoes. It looks like it's casual outfit mix with the classic outfit and I am not sure which should you replace the pants or shoes... The bow and cuffs, it's not good quality due to the texture so I would like to see a different ones that do have a good quality on it.

B+

I'm going to put off grading, because I agree, this isn't Burlesque. I think the title should be changed. The pants are casual, the shoes are casual... If there's anything that Burlesque is not, it's casual.

I agree, this seems more like a last minute Halloween outfit than Burlesque.

Because of the number of members in agreement over the theme, the title has been changed. Don't let this discourage you from continuing to submit for this theme, Burlesque is a tricky theme, especially for males.

I agree with the ladies above. I love, love, love that you attempted the theme for male--I agree with Fright: don't get discouraged, please try again in a new submission.
I feel that the fur vest wasn't a great choice because of the hovering. The bow and cuffs were a nice idea for the theme, but it should have been finished with better fitting pants or underwear, and of course matching the feet to whatever route you choose. Google images actually provided a lot of good examples for male burlesque imo...you could always look through some examples to gather some inspiration.
So I'd just leave the pants and shoes and find a new top/accessories to finish it.

B+

Agreed with iMoo 100%. You did a better job than i'd ever do on a male avi atleast! I'm a coward.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Dreta : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo  : Judge          |
|          B+ : Pjush : Judge          |

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