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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Elle Avatar Talls. Mai midnight 
bySinderellabySilence
2799554

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Jessica Rabbit B Kourtney Brows Pecan. MiddleScarla Head
byPookiebyBamahibylDBbyM0nstre
606719489987

Clothes

TopShoes

SparksLuxury | Platfor
byWhimsbyNygiaz
598664

Accessories

ActionsActionsDainty HandsFurRingsEarrings

Shoulder Scale 965% Hand Scale Black Sparkly NFluffy Shawl - BBlack Fluffy Rin[LD]FluffyBlack
byMrzLindaEmpirbyxlxDBADBOYxlxbyFluffyCandyYubygownsbyAnoiaReewanbyLouLeDiviNe
454425499740774664

NecklacesBangles

Naughty Choker NSilver Bangles
byWhimsbyWhims
598598

This isn't bad but it needs a little bit of tweaking. You're mixing silver and gold, your earrings are gold, while your bracelet and your outfit are silver. The shoes aren't really burlesque either, you need something a little less strappy and a little less platform like. The fur texture on the shawl isn't really the best, it looks smudged and grayish. It might be personal preference but I'm not too fond of this hair mesh, it seems a little wonky around the root area, I'm sure there are similar meshes out there that are made better.

B+

I agree with Fright. I like the hair, though. I'd also like to suggest maybe opting for diamonds/black pearls in your accessories because they're all over the lingerie.

B+

I dunno, I don't think the hair would be something I'd dock for on its own, but with a chance to resub? Yeah, I think you could find something a little more flattering. I agree with the ladies, above.

B+

Agree with Fright
Though I don't mind the hair, it was already used before and no issues were brought up

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : SinHaven  : 1786           |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1786.

Resub Granted