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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkinSkin

BorneEmo SkinOwl Dead Butterf
bySoonbySkinsbyewu
773691555

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHeadHead

!! Hyland ~ Blacq.21 K. Black BrSelene-MortalHeadScale 93.5%//Lila V1\\
byDizebyqubbyRoybyVisNovasbyFrightful
630499399444999

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Emo LeatherEMO ROCK ONEMO BIKER BOOTS
byImmortalSynnebyMysticDesignebydjMystic
668698798

Accessories

ScalerGloves

Combo Scaler S85 Fingerless Glov
byScalerbyAko
448554

I think you could have left the head scaler off, upped the shoulders and hands by 5% each, and just left the arms at 100. And maybe look for a little more recent skin. But this is cool; the clothing pieces come together nicely imo. I just think that you should have spent some time accessorizing it with more than just gloves. Like bracelets and/or a nice chain necklace. It's also kind of hard to see a lot of texture in the hair...I'm not sure if it's just because of my laptop screen, though. I'll ask for a resub just to see some of these issues fixed.
Also: This feels like a rocker submission, but I suppose it could still count for emo if other judges think it fits.

B+

Agreed with Moo very well. I can see the texture in the hair, but it's not a very strong texture. I am not good to judging over the emo but yes, I can see this is more likely a rocker submission.

B+

It's really easy to swap out the more dated skin you chose for a more updated skin that you like, and then add a layerable makeup of any kind. Lila has quite a bit available for it, include black lips, and heavy eyemakeups:

Lila Layerable Makeup

You'll have to wear it with a lashless version of the head, like this one, but it's going to expand your options and allow you to use more updated skins by developers that may not otherwise lean toward that style.

I agree with iMoo about all other points, except for the hair. I can see the hair texture perfectly fine on my screen, so I think it's just a resolution issue. I also don't think this fits the "Emo" theme.

B+

I agree with the all the critiques.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo        : Judge          |
|          B+ : Dreta       : Judge          |
|          B+ : SinHaven    : 1815           |
|          B+ : iWhiteAngel : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1815.

Resub Granted

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Description: Added a necklace, Changed the shoulder and arm scaler, skin and make up. Thank you for the critiques!










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkinSkin

BorneOwl Dead Butterf Debora Skin |S|
bySoonbyewubyShicuki
773555576

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

F| Hyland 2 Blacq.21 K. Black BrSelene-Mortal//Lila V2 N/L N/
byFinebyqubbyRoybyFrightful
636499399999

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Emo LeatherEMO ROCK ONEMO BIKER BOOTS
byImmortalSynnebyMysticDesignebydjMystic
668698798

Accessories

NecklacesScalerScalerFace PaintFace PaintGloves

|PF| Rocker NeckCombo Scaler S90Shoulder Scaler�Lila Derivable �Lila Destiny I Fingerless Glov
byTwinkybyScalerbyalvin73bySinHavenbySinHavenbyAko
675448696526691554

I am so excited to see the update skin with the makeup. There is a few of glitches, from the hair through the jacket and arm. I would rather to see a different avatar and hairstyle to avoid the glitches. (I know I never mentioned from the original, I just realized you did not take a screenshot with the avatar chosen from the original. For futures, take a screenshot with the avatar as well like this resub ones).

A-

The poses in this one is with the avatar pose but my first submission I didn't but from now on I will I usually do but forgot that time and I agree I like this much better. Thank you sinhaven for the make up and head suggestions!

I agree with Dreta, but this is better.

A-