Sedulity


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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Cara. Next Time |S|
byJatsbyShicuki
344597

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHeadHead

 - Houletha Suga(ISA)KD Brows 2 chispi greenScarlar headNeck Fix
byKeneticbyisabelpaisitabyuvbyAibubyDroll
661554444987844

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Cz!Hoodie Top4$ Lean on / RL-A- White Canvas
byChiCzbyEssmebyUltra
664576608

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerScalerScalerBracelets

Foot Shoe ScalerLeg Thigh ScalerHand Scaler 60%Shoulder Scaler Head Scaler 95%~V~Lush Brecelet
byScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyvialov
419419419448419499

Facial JewelryDainty HandsNecklacesEyeLashes

Lara Piercing[RC]La Femme NaiI#2 Chains Stone Lashes
byRanerbyRomyChanelbyIZISbyActual
640675633550

The head/skin combo is really pretty. And I actually really like the outfit. But I do think that the proportions need fixing. Curvy girls are amazing, but something this exaggerated isn't really acceptable in Sedulity. The leg width should go. 90-95% shoulder scalers and 65-70% hand scalers are best. The head scaler isn't really helping but hurting. And feet scalers are fine if you think they're necessary, but the feet are too small atm, so removing the foot scaler would probably be the best thing for you.
Edit: I should probably mention that we don't normally mix silver and gold. The necklace is totally fine here, but I think the bracelet should be gold. Maybe a bangle or something, rather than a large cuff.

B+

Looking any better? I changed the scalers you told me to and the bracelet. I've always had difficulties finding good bracelets so if you know any good developers I would like to hear suggestions. Btw whats your opinion on this avatar/pose? Does that finger on the hips freak you out a little haha? Didn't change the avatar/pose yet but i'm wondering if I should.


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You should save the resub for after the final grade is posted and a resub is granted. I usually do that right away, so you'll receive a message from me telling you when it's okay to post the remodeled outfit. I'm going to remove that second one for now.

Also, I have no problem with the avatar; I actually like the pose a lot! As for jewelry, I never used any by a single developer. Instead, I normally go to "newest products" with my search for whatever might fit. "Gold" or "bangles" or something like that.

Agree with Moo. Actually, I am in love with this outfit, nice job!

B+

The big issue here is the scalers as iMoo mentioned
The bulky bracelet doesnt really match this, the outfit is very casual, so look for acessories you'd wear everyday
Also, these lashes are glitching through her lids

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Dreta     : Judge          |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Dreta     : Judge          |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |

Resub Granted

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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Yamea Next Time |S|
byDrollbyShicuki
399597

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

E. Retta Almond$ Hina Brows[MT] Elys . BlueKD^SCARLA HEAD
byEcibySelivbyMissMayabykloudust
663554499877

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Cz!Hoodie Top4$ Comfy Jeans RL-A- White Canvas
byChiCzbyAmorebyUltra
664664608

Accessories

ScalerScalerNecklacesBraceletsDainty Hands

Hand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler Nysa Silver Neck$$$. Silver SterFrench Nails
byScalerbyScalerbyTR09byYallabyiKoneko
419448554609609

Much better

A

A lot better, good job.

A