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Avatars & Skin

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Luna!F! Annie 3
byDrollbyFear
773499

Head & Face

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-J- Pamelic phanNo Eyebrowsm| Carla brows bC| Olive$ Karla Head
byJavabyEyebrowsbyMoonrisebyCaturrdaybyEvz
661669609499987

Clothes

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!D! Vanessa Pink Mini.RL.mm. Milla Shoes
byiDezzBanksbyExzybyMissMaya
664609586

Accessories

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Hands ScalerShoulder Scaler.Cst: Wht French.D. WhiteRosesHe[Is] Belly Chain
byScalerbyScalerbyDashingbyDerpinabyIsmeny
698698698598499

No complaints.

A

- The french nails is suppose for the skin goes dark a bit.
- I would prefer to see some cream/white color of the flower headband so it can fit to the chain and fit"ish" to the shoes.
- Somehow I feel this is simple, add some bracelets and rings would help the look better.

A-

I honestly think that a normal skirt would compliment this look better. Everything is pretty 'innocent' until you look at that. I'm not super keen on the belt, either... I just don't think it compliments anything in particular here, despite it being an attempt to pull flowers into the outfit? The open skirt just doesn't help it look "natural" to me. I think bracelets would have been a good call. So I agree with Dreta on the bareness, here. The nails are relatively minor, but certainly something to keep in mind for future submissions. I would also suggest going with some sandal-styled shoes instead of plain white. I know it was to pull in the flowers, but I can handle seeing white flowers in a colorful outfit like this. Or you could pull in white via bracelets/accessories.

B+

I have to agree with Moo here. And although the flower crown fits her head here quite nicely, it just is a bit much. Other than that, definitely look into the other critiques. Not too bad, though!!

B+