February 27, 2017, 3:53 pm
Outfit Items: View
Description:
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
!K Amarha.
Ashley v2 | 40
by
Kelie
by
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
No Eyebrows
m| Carla brows b
by
Clothes
TopBottom
by
Accessories
ScalerDainty Hands
~A: Wine Color N
Edited 261 time(s). Last edit at 03/04/2017 09:49PM by Guest_SedulityGrader15.
February 28, 2017, 3:35 am
The avatar you selected here is horribly warpig the avatar. The boobs are squished, the waist is at an awkward angle, there are points jutting out at the waist and hips... An avatar shouldn't just be selected for its snappy pose - it should also be selected because it flatters the outfit. The way that this avatar warps things, I don't think it could flatter any outfit.
I don't think the PVC boots you picked really go, here - nothing else is PVC, and while I'm not against mixing PVC and non-PVC, in this particular instance, it doesn't work.
The face you picked is very under-played for an outfit as edgy and risque as this. Some lips, and even some eye makeup, would have really picked this up.
You're mixing metallics - the rings are gold and the spikes on the top are silver. You've also tried incorporating lace and red into the outfit (the collar and nails, respectively) but neither is represented elsewhere.
I really believe this needs a resubmission.
B
I don't think the PVC boots you picked really go, here - nothing else is PVC, and while I'm not against mixing PVC and non-PVC, in this particular instance, it doesn't work.
The face you picked is very under-played for an outfit as edgy and risque as this. Some lips, and even some eye makeup, would have really picked this up.
You're mixing metallics - the rings are gold and the spikes on the top are silver. You've also tried incorporating lace and red into the outfit (the collar and nails, respectively) but neither is represented elsewhere.
I really believe this needs a resubmission.
B
March 2, 2017, 9:58 am
B+
March 4, 2017, 9:49 pm
This is a simple fit but its sexy. I do agree that the avatar does warp the outfit but it doesn't bother me that much.
A-
A-
March 4, 2017, 9:49 pm
B+
88.54 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 89.44 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B : SinHaven : 1823 | | B+ : iMoo    : Judge | | B+ : Dreta   : Judge | | B+ : llChana : 1684 | | A- : Implex  : Judge |
Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 86.6 % ( B ) with an average rating weight of 1754.