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Description: Sedulity










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkinBomb asf . $Barbie LipbyPosePackbyVinn345664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHeadZabietta FadeN7 | kloudust ebDiane EyesAlexa HeadbyDrollbyoct91996byRoybyDroll663499399949

Clothes

Top1 DuplicateShoes Camisole$ Ripped Shorts/S U P E R ! FbyEvesbyEssmebyGet598554663

Accessories

ScalerAnimated MagicDainty HandsChokersEyeLashesCombo Scaler S85Full Body Light $ Kylie Nails!D! # Kill Choke$ LashesbyScalerbyLisycbyEssmebyiDezzBanksbyEssme448499554609609

Outfit wise, I don't really see any issues
For the main group, you might want to start adding more accessories since this is pretty simple
Even for casual outfits like this, a couple accessories are great
My main issue here is proportions
We usually prefer 90-100-70, the one you have is a bit smaller, but the aci you choose already shrinks the shoulders, so it looks off
I'd rather see another avi to fix proportions
Plus this avatar is glitching twice, the feet are on each other and the right hand goes right through her butt
I'm also not a big fan of this skin
It's not visible with this hair, but the coloring of the ears is completely different to the rest of the skin
Also, there's something off about the coloration of the neck and collarbone, its not very even and blurred out

B+

Some of Vinn's skins are a little questionable, but the ears aren't visible and the collarbone/neck area is pretty minor. Overall, I also see nothing wrong with the outfit.
I do agree about the proportions/avatar and accessories, though. But the proportions are a bigger deal than the glitches.
I'd also like to mention that you should keep body and face lights out of your submissions in the future. They're unnecessary and don't really contribute anything to the outfit except for cost.

B+

I think everything has been said.
You need to pay more attention to the details (they make the difference) because the outfit itself has nothing wrong.

B+

Agree with everything above

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : llChana   : 1567           |
|          B+ : Tostito   : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1567.

Resub Granted

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Description:










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkinEllaC | Yumi - VervebyFrezebyEyeCandiFem389695

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead[D] Xandra Burn-AK- Freya BrowsDiane EyesAlexa HeadbyDerpinabyAnnieKMZbyRoybyDroll658499399949

Clothes

Top1 DuplicateShoes Camisole$ Ripped Shorts/S U P E R ! FbyEvesbyEssmebyGet598554663

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerDainty HandsChokersEyeLashesHand Scaler 70%Leg Thigh ScalerShoulder Scaler $ Kylie Nails!D! # Kill Choke$ LashesbyScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyEssmebyiDezzBanksbyEssme419419448554609609Aviator GlasseWatches$ Essme GlassesRose Gold Watch byEvesbyiRaee509594

I'm not sure why the screenies look so blurry. Especially second to last...
Anyway, the proportions look a lot better now. We tend to avoid leg scalers in Sedulity unless we feel like we really need them, but it's not doing any harm here. I think the glasses were also a random addition and don't really suit the outfit much.

A-

This is better.
Agree about the glasses.
Also, i didn't think you needed to change the hair, but this one is nice anyway.

A-

Agree about the glasses as well.
You should have made the watch gold rather than rose gold so that the metals match nicely rather than a random shade of pink thrown in there.
Make sure to fix your proportions before you take the products in room.
Better.

A-