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Description: Sedulity










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Female avatar. Ami - Hugs & K
byIMVU inc.byMiru
2500647

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Jirina Black > Sno eyebrows[E] MY HAZEL [FC] Ursa Head N
byPookieby3D1ObyYazmiinbyFabianaCastel
6613896641016

Clothes

Top1 DuplicateBottomBottomShoes

( hannah denim c! Harem PlaidAlexandra II Pos.0 Wink for daddILust Heels Deni
byMarthabyNobodybySinderellabyMahoganybyIZIS
64263314999664774

Accessories

New Acces.New Acces.ScalerScalerScalerEarrings

ICO Dainty Hand Sword Brows \ GrHand Scaler 65%Shoulder Scaler Longer Legs ScalA Shadowless Lig
byLOLbyHyrabyScalerbyScalerbyAnarchbyKeodi
599798419448698399

ActionsChokersDainty HandsFace PaintFace Paint

Grin 15%IStrech Choker D( Love You Chain   Ursa| Sloth III   Ursa| Drunk 
bySelinaCruzbyIZISbyMarthabySinHavenbySinHaven
499614598621621

Just wanted to add some life to it with expressions, hope that's okay! I accepted, I will keep them off for viewer's sake.

The wink, pose pack, shadowless light, and grin actions are all unnecessary. They might be nice to use while taking pictures and modeling, but in Sedulity, the outfits are meant to appeal to the general public while remaining pretty affordable. So products like those only add to the cost without contributing anything.
The dainty hands by LOL counts as a second hand scaler, so that's not needed either. And the leg scaler is hurting more than helping while looking at proportions, even though I understand you might be going more for a 'model' figure.
Otherwise, I genuinely think this is an interesting submission. I think my biggest issue is the shoes because of the odd texture and lack of detail. They're a boot mesh with the jean texture pasted over it...not much else.
So, this submission could use a little cleaning, but the resub should be really good.

B+

Yeah, you do have a lot of things that are not needed.
I really like the makeup you have chosen, but the shoes aren't great quality, like iMoo said.
This has potential, just try to keep things more simple.

B+

Clothing wise I think this is unique and a pretty good job. I also am not sure about shoes. You are missing an avatar though. It is not recommended to use a pose pack and take screenshots of poses that don't come directly from the avatar because they are misleading. I agree with some cleanup this could be a good submission

B+

Agree with above, also the eyebrow color should be matching the root color of your hair, so the eyebrows should be actually black in this case!

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo    : Judge          |
|          B+ : llChana : Judge          |
|          B+ : Implex  : 1383           |
|          B+ : Tostito : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1383.

Resub Granted