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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

kate!C Rya Skin Crea
byKhiliebyCheSav
333524

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

-J- Zyana rust[SD86] Real Gree$  Foreign !!
byJavabyChristmasBellbyMaertice
658554987

Clothes

TopShoes

PD Masquerade Ba!E! Tamy (HEELS)
byDaise2byEMlS
840632

Accessories

ScalerEarringsDainty HandsBraceletsNecklaces

Hand Scaler 70%Panie EarringsHands Satan`s~A: Gold BraceleBlush Back Neckl
byScalerbyWhimsbyuvbylllAdrianalllbyWhims
419636554669636

I would have liked to see a closer shot of her face as well. But from the looks of it, you've done a lot better while accessorizing! The finger tattoos are out of place here...it's a small complaint, but something to keep in mind for future submissions that are similar to this one. The hoop earrings also feel misplaced. Diamonds or studs that match the rest of the jewelry would have been much better. The same goes for the bracelet, more or less...it's definitely more casual than the necklace imo.
But the biggest problem is the dress; the quality isn't good enough for Sedulity. Definitely make sure that you're using the best-textured products that you can find in the future, otherwise, your submissions could be declined. And if they're dresses like this, no chance of a resub is possible...

B-

Agree with iMoo.
Also, are you taking a *hiresnobg? I don't know if it's just my eyes this late at night or if your images are blurry.
This is a good try nonetheless, just make sure to watch out for good quality products and simple accessories when you have such extravagant clothing.

B-

I believe everything has been said.
Watch out for the quality of the products and be more thoughtful when you accessorize.

B-

B-
81.67 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 81.67 % ( B- )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B- : iMoo    : Judge          |
|          B- : Tostito : Judge          |
|          B- : llChana : Judge          |

Resub declined