March 13, 2017, 3:13 pm

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Description: Sedulity Cojunto Masculino moderno

Avatars & Skin
Skin!! Reflejo Remas
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Zei
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Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
s Henry > Noir
r Natural Eyebro
r Black Eyes . M
L U K A
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Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
4 | Wine Couple
L'C Pants Ripped
yzzy SUPERSTAR
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4RFN
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Ballec
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YZZY
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597
663
Accessories
ScalerScaler
Actions
Actions
New Acces.
Ear Plugs
Hand Scaler 72.5
Head Scaler 105%
Thug Life Avatar
Stay cool Poses~
Toothpick
r Black Plugs
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Scaler
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Scaler
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Pirest
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Synet
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Gloves
r Perfect Hands.
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March 13, 2017, 7:05 pm
Hi and welcome to sedulity academy. Good first submission. Just a few things that need to be fixed. First you don't need the head scaler or action/pose packs added . Those are frowned upon in sedulity submissions. Also make sure to take a full body shot with the avatar you use for one of the pictures you submit. I dont think the jacket is the best quality. So new avatar, no head scaler, no pose/actions added.. Its a learning curve just make sure to read the rules carefully. Also make sure when submiting you put the correct tag. in the subject line. Awaiting Submission not just Submission
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March 13, 2017, 7:49 pm
The avatar is an old one, so it's listed in the accessories.
Otherwise, I agree with Seksi about the head scaler and extra actions/pose pack. The jacket's quality isn't the best, but it's still passable. In all honesty, nothing I'd fail over. As for the title of your submission, I can change it this time.
Just remember to type it correctly in the future. Great first submission!
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Otherwise, I agree with Seksi about the head scaler and extra actions/pose pack. The jacket's quality isn't the best, but it's still passable. In all honesty, nothing I'd fail over. As for the title of your submission, I can change it this time.

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March 14, 2017, 5:34 pm
Agree with the above. Not a fan of the white Adidas for this, they're too random imo and the white does not fit in anywhere. It's not enough for a resub, but just watch out for little details like that for the next time!
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