April 27, 2017, 11:05 am
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Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
Cika
Sam | Daze
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Essay
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Head & Face
HairEyes
INo Brows On
Female - Ice.
-- SCALER 110% H
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Clothes
TopBottom
Accessories
MagickFace Paint
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Facial Jewelry
EyeLashes
Actions
[W] Ora head bot
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April 28, 2017, 4:30 am
This is very nice submission as bundle. In Sedulity you just need to remove these extra accessories you have:
-Eyeliners, skin itself have enough eyemakeup
-Brain in head
-Body light
-Neck fix
-Body and head scalers are not needed in this submission but sometimes they are acceptable
-Dimples, nice idea but it's not necessary and it only makes outfit cost more
-Most heads have eyelashes already and Sedulity prefers more natural looking ones. I recommend you to read some helpful stuff from Sedulity Rules about Choosing heads(and lashes with them).
You have used rose gold and regular gold on your jewellery and that is also something Sedulity don't prefer - mixing metals like gold, rose gold, silver etc. Also make sure the metal, gold for example, is same shade in all jewellery. Hand scaler must be between 65%-70% and you might want to add 90%-95% shoulder scaler on this.
Really nice outfit after you just clean up the accessories.
B+
-Eyeliners, skin itself have enough eyemakeup
-Brain in head
-Body light
-Neck fix
-Body and head scalers are not needed in this submission but sometimes they are acceptable
-Dimples, nice idea but it's not necessary and it only makes outfit cost more
-Most heads have eyelashes already and Sedulity prefers more natural looking ones. I recommend you to read some helpful stuff from Sedulity Rules about Choosing heads(and lashes with them).
You have used rose gold and regular gold on your jewellery and that is also something Sedulity don't prefer - mixing metals like gold, rose gold, silver etc. Also make sure the metal, gold for example, is same shade in all jewellery. Hand scaler must be between 65%-70% and you might want to add 90%-95% shoulder scaler on this.
Really nice outfit after you just clean up the accessories.
B+
April 28, 2017, 7:12 am
In addition, you have a lot of products that aren't needed, like Naewi said.
Stuff like brain, "avatar light", "perfect body"(using rll shorts already make the model curvy) and dimples (this skin already acentuates that area), are products that only add to the cost of the outfit, and do nothing to enhance it.
You have three eyeliners, one is enough, choose the one that fits the head better.
The proportions in this are a bit off. Your hands are too small, we recommend 65-70% for the hands, and also need 90-95% shoulders, otherwise they will look too broad.
The nails you choose already had rings, adding one more also isn't needed.
In this case, and if you use the shoulder scaler, the head scaler isn't needed.
B+
Stuff like brain, "avatar light", "perfect body"(using rll shorts already make the model curvy) and dimples (this skin already acentuates that area), are products that only add to the cost of the outfit, and do nothing to enhance it.
You have three eyeliners, one is enough, choose the one that fits the head better.
The proportions in this are a bit off. Your hands are too small, we recommend 65-70% for the hands, and also need 90-95% shoulders, otherwise they will look too broad.
The nails you choose already had rings, adding one more also isn't needed.
In this case, and if you use the shoulder scaler, the head scaler isn't needed.
B+
April 30, 2017, 1:02 pm
This submission needs to be identified as a bundle in the subject, I changed it for you but please make sure you do this yourself in the future
You have way too many unnecessary products on
Anything that is not directly contributing to your outfit has to be take out since all they do is bring up the price of the outfit
The head is too big here so you dont need the head scaler
The hips are too wide, so the perfect scaler is also unnecessary
The hands are too small, 70% is usually the best scaler for hands
You have four eyeliners on
These lashes don't really look so good here, but that might be due to all the liners you have
B+
You have way too many unnecessary products on
Anything that is not directly contributing to your outfit has to be take out since all they do is bring up the price of the outfit
The head is too big here so you dont need the head scaler
The hips are too wide, so the perfect scaler is also unnecessary
The hands are too small, 70% is usually the best scaler for hands
You have four eyeliners on
These lashes don't really look so good here, but that might be due to all the liners you have
B+
May 3, 2017, 1:56 pm
B+