Outfit Items: View
Description: Sedulity










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

NinaLiz | Everyday -
byJatsbyHenna
663690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

$ Zahniya Blacks| Nat Brows KD $ Natural EyesC Bella Head
byMaerticebyScarlingbyEssmebyCANXAH
661554444987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Shirt IM RL Stocking ShortsD. D-Platform Bo
bySoenbyAncientImmortbyiDezzBanks
664598664

Accessories

ActionsEarringsNails

Hand Resizer6 Black Diamond $ Vogue Black
byScalerbyTuabyMaertice
698625554

Diamonds as earrings for this kind of outfit is a little random idea in my opinion but because they are black I can accept them. Some rings or bracelet might have been also nice because hands are a bit bare now. Otherwise very nice submission. Top and shoes are very interesting together. Nice job.

A-

I like this submission, but both top and shorts don't have the best quality, but especiaaly the shorts i don't think they have enough quality for the site. Since you only can change one of the clothing items i would change the shorts, and make the outfit work better in terms of quality. You also need a little change in your proportions, the hands are slightly big and the shoulders are a bit broad. We recommend 90-95% shoulders and 65-70% hands.
Lastly, the avatar that you have chosen is causing glitches, that is something that you need to keep in mind for future submissions, since i will want a resub for this, i would like you to find an avatar that didn't cause glitches.
But i like the overall submissions, just needs a little fix before passing.

B+

I agree with the ladies above. I'd also like to see some new bottoms, here. Not a bad start, though!

B+

B+
89.44 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 89.44 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : Naewi   : Judge          |
|          B+ : llChana : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo    : Judge          |

Outfit Items: View
Description: Resub; changed the earrings, added some bracelets, changed the shorts (same style, but I think it's better), 91% shoulder scaler, 65% hand scaler, and changed the avatar.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

AlineLiz | Everyday -
byFrezebyHenna
389690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

$ Zahniya Blacks| Nat Brows KD $ Natural EyesC Bella Head
byMaerticebyScarlingbyEssmebyCANXAH
661554444987

Clothes

Top1 DuplicateBottomShoes

Shirt IM RL [Is] Short + StoHand Scaler 65 %D. D-Platform Bo
bySoenbyIsmenybydosoruybyiDezzBanks
664664391664

Accessories

EarringsScalerBraceletsNails

*M* Black EarrinShoulder Scaler[L] black Bracel$ Vogue Black
byMilica09byScalerby0LD0byMaertice
410698596554

No resub was officially granted. A moderator needs to post "Resub Granted" and will message you when it happens. The message will include something like: "Resub Granted: [Thread Link] Please post a resubmission as a reply (not an edit) and edit the title of the thread to be "Submission [Resub] ""
I'll let it slide this time, but you'll need to edit the title of the original post to let us know that this is a resub.

Anyway, this is better. The hands are pretty small this time, though. Also, it's not really a big deal, but I would have used gold or silver earrings instead of black, while using black hair. And it's the same for this submission--the pictures look a bit blurry to me. Hope you can fix that if it's not just me.

A

Resub Granted

PS the bot needs to see the words resub granted and grades after the 2nd post count. The outfit has to be reposted again AFTER resub granted.

Outfit Items: View
Description: Resub; changed the earrings, added some bracelets, changed the shorts (same style, but I think it's better), 91% shoulder scaler, 65% hand scaler, and changed the avatar.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

AlineLiz | Everyday -
byFrezebyHenna
389690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

$ Zahniya Blacks| Nat Brows KD $ Natural EyesC Bella Head
byMaerticebyScarlingbyEssmebyCANXAH
661554444987

Clothes

Top1 DuplicateBottomShoes

Shirt IM RL [Is] Short + StoHand Scaler 65 %D. D-Platform Bo
bySoenbyIsmenybydosoruybyiDezzBanks
664664391664

Accessories

EarringsScalerBraceletsNails

*M* Black EarrinShoulder Scaler[L] black Bracel$ Vogue Black
byMilica09byScalerby0LD0byMaertice
410698596554

Shorts are better and also accessorising looks nice in my opinion. You need to read rules about taking photos again and if you need more help watch the video about taking them, these photos are for some reason looking little blurry. Otherwise good job with this resub. I give you "-" because the quality of photos.

A-

The quality of the photos shouldn't impact a grade. They won't be used on the website and the outfits can/should be tried on in shop while grading. This deserves an A.

A