May 12, 2017, 9:11 pm

Outfit Items: View
Description: Bad and Beautiful
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Geisha Gun 1
Meg | Berry - 20
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80S
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Henna
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Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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Lulla Bliss
Poderous Brows
[E] MY HAZEL
Warm B. Julie
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Casual
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Koye
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Yazmiin
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Koye
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Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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$ Kendall Top
mm. Shaza Skirt
Baby-Girl Pumps
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Caroline
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MissMaya
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Exzy
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Accessories
ScalerEarrings
Nerd Glasses
Necklaces
Dainty Hands
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Combo Scaler S90
Panie Earrings
Glasses
mm. Evita - Neck
$ Amore Nails Bl
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Scaler
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Whims
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K4h
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MissMaya
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Amore
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May 14, 2017, 2:08 pm
I like the clothes you are using, but i'm not sure about the accessories, i know there is a story behind it but i'm not sure it looks cohesive, i would prefer to see a bracelet than the guns or cigar.
I also don't think that the necklace was needed, since the top kinda works as a choker as well.
The hand tattoos seem a bit random in a fancy look like this.
Overall this is a interesting submission and i don't see enough issues to ask for a resub.
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I also don't think that the necklace was needed, since the top kinda works as a choker as well.
The hand tattoos seem a bit random in a fancy look like this.
Overall this is a interesting submission and i don't see enough issues to ask for a resub.
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May 15, 2017, 10:19 am
I agree with Chana. It's always nice to see a submission with a story, but the accessories could have been a little bit better. Good job, though.
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