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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Taina Avatar|e| the fairest
byPazbyElfe
663664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

|e| hale ombreNOT EyebrowsEyebrows red - BM' Big blue eyesSafira Head
byElfebylH20lbyM0nysbyM0nysbyPaz
658367649499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Jean JacketOwl Pixie Short Dark gray ankle 
byPazbyewubyOonaHelena
697598660

Accessories

ScalerChokersGlovesLayerable StocEar Plugs

Combo Scaler S85y! Cute Chockerx Hands Goth BlaBLK Layer RL StoEar Plugs
byScalerbyUkkabyM0nysbyxIxH3llzB3llzbyIMLou
448482554499499

This isn't a bad submission, but there are some issues in here.

Regarding the clothes, the quality of the jacket is awful, super blurry, does not meet the standards for the site so it needs to be changed. I like that you added the socks, good thinking, but again, they don't have the best quality, i would look for ones with better quality.

Your eyebrows are red, they don't match well the hair that you are using, my advice to you for future submissions is try to match the eyebrows to the roots of the hair of your choose , this is the safe way for choosing eyebrow.

The accessories that you choose are cohesive to the look, good job on that.

About your proportions also need to be fixed, here in Sedulity we recommend 90-95% shoulders, no arm scalers, and 65-70% hands.

Also, your photos look very blurry, don't know why.

B+

I agree with Chana. The eyes also look almost inhuman to me because of their size and color.

B+

I agree with everything Chana and iMoo said. I see photos a bit blurry too so I recommend you to read rules about photos again and maybe see the video as well that shows how to take good photos. Otherwise I really like this outfit and I would wear it myself too very easily - after the little fixing. ^^

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : llChana : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo    : Judge          |
|          B+ : Naewi   : Judge          |

Resub Granted

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Description: I changed the top ( sorry for the duplicate but it was the best one I could find )
I changed the stockings, the eyebrows ( to mach the hair ), the scalers, the avatar ( because some of the fingers were going through my hip ) and the eyes.









Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Av. Aica drv|e| the fairest
byM0nysbyElfe
499664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

|e| hale ombres| LuaBrows KD. . Watter ClearSafira Head
byElfebyScarlingbySindrobyPaz
658554444987

Clothes

1 DuplicateBottomShoes

 Clasic Denim JaOwl Pixie Short Dark gray ankle 
byExzybyewubyOonaHelena
668598660

Accessories

ActionsChokersGlovesNew Acces.Skins & TattooEar Plugs

!S! Hand Resizery! Cute Chockerx Hands Goth BlaShoulder Scaler!TX -Layer StockEar Plugs
bySandyzPassionbyUkkabyM0nysbyOriginalSinbyT3XXbyIMLou
598482554509664499

Much better! Good job listening the critiques and fixing it.

A

Yes, this is much betterr.

A