May 28, 2017, 10:26 am

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Edited 796 time(s). Last edit at 07/17/2017 04:56AM by llChana.
June 2, 2017, 6:13 pm
So I could see everything on this as Boho except the dress
This dress is so Steampunk inspired that to me the accessories and dress clash with each other and dont work for Boho
This dress is so Steampunk inspired that to me the accessories and dress clash with each other and dont work for Boho
June 2, 2017, 6:19 pm
The overall quality here is on the lower end. It seems like the dress has a copy/pasted image on it. And the breast part isn't of the best quality either.
I tried this on in the client, and the dress is distorted/blurry in some areas.
The dress has gold on it (on the straps), and you followed the gold throughout the rest of the outfit, besides for the bracelets. Those are silver, although it's minor, it's not all gold.
I like the hair and the head piece though. It just doesn't all seem to go well together with this dress.
Good start though.
B+
I tried this on in the client, and the dress is distorted/blurry in some areas.
The dress has gold on it (on the straps), and you followed the gold throughout the rest of the outfit, besides for the bracelets. Those are silver, although it's minor, it's not all gold.
I like the hair and the head piece though. It just doesn't all seem to go well together with this dress.
Good start though.
B+
June 3, 2017, 9:43 am
I kept putting off grading this because I'm also unsure how to feel about the dress. It doesn't give me Boho vibes, so I think I could only agree with Emerald on that bit. I think I agree with her on everything tbh...even though I love the head/skin combo and the hair and headpiece. The dress at the top actually doesn't look bad to me; it almost looks like velvet or hide or something old-school like that, um...like it gives me tribal vibes, if not for the image on the dress--since that looks like gears and metal and whatnot. Maybe you should try taking a new direction with the dress and step away from boho altogether.
B+
B+
June 7, 2017, 5:11 pm
Agree with above
Though I still think you could try to resub this as a steampunk outfit
B+
Though I still think you could try to resub this as a steampunk outfit
B+
June 7, 2017, 5:20 pm

B+
87.44 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 87.22 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : EmeraldLagoon : 1808 | | B+ : iMoo         : Judge | | B : Dreta        : Judge | | B+ : LYDIANN16    : Judge |
Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1808.
July 17, 2017, 4:56 am

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Description: I tried to do a more fancy steampunk... but i'm not sure, i'm not too familiar with the steampunk theme.
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July 17, 2017, 7:15 am
I don't think the dress is site-ready at all. It has only copy-paste material.
B-
B-
July 17, 2017, 2:01 pm
I have to agree, it's very copy and paste and the metals are flat. It's also a little plain for steampunk. If you're ever stuck on a theme just google it, google has tons of examples of steampunk looks.
B-
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