May 31, 2017, 6:14 am

Outfit Items: View
Description: Sedulity
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Female avatar
Erin | 40
by
IMVU inc.
by
Henna
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2500
691
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyebrows
Eyes
Head
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|Olamide v2 Blac
Derivable No Eye
. glam brow | bl
Selene-Mortal
. Indira hd + fa
by
MrsKitty
by
MP311
by
Zephyr
by
Roy
by
Zephyr
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663
334
665
399
999
Clothes
Top1 Duplicate
1 Duplicate
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Hoodie.
Hot Ripps+Stcks
Gothabilly Babe
by
Exzy
by
Dexy
by
Dexy
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554
598
587
Accessories
ScalerDainty Hands
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Hand Scaler 70%
wcNails+Rings+t
by
Scaler
by
Natti
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419
798



Edited 279 time(s). Last edit at 06/11/2017 02:00AM by Guest_SedulityGrader15.
June 1, 2017, 4:01 pm
When you take photos be sure its with the avatar you are wearing and now you are only wearing base avatar. I recommend you to add 90%-95% shoulder scaler that we commonly use in Sedulity. I think nails and rings don't really fit because there is silver ribbon 'holes' on shoes and also silver ribbon holes on your hoodie. Silver rings and maybe adding silver earrings could complete this outfit better. Some other shoes might work better with top+bottom but I'm not veeery sure about that. I hope other judges give opinion on them. Hairstyle is a bit too fancy looking in my opinion but other judges might disagree with me. No other complaints. Nice outfit with little fixing. ^^
B+
B+
June 1, 2017, 5:19 pm
I agree with Naewi, though I don't think that the hair is too fancy or anything. This is going to need an avatar and shoulder scaler...and a bit of finishing with the accessories. As far as the boots go, something grungier or leather might work? Kind of feels like nitpicking, but the platforms are pretty heavy for this getup, streetwear/urban or not.
B+
B+
June 11, 2017, 2:00 am

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Naewi : Judge | | B+ : iMoo : Judge | | B+ : Pjush : Judge |