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AvatarSkin

!K Amarha.Camila | Nude - 
byKeliebyHenna
663691

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 Zoe.M Nanda Eyebrowmm. Selfie AddicMeg | Head
byXiubyMizzebyMissMayabyHenna
669390499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

M All Eternity B$ Circus Pants R$ Cold as ice
byMizzebyCarolinebyMissC
664554660

Accessories

ScalerNailsChokersEarrings

Hand Scaler 65% Fall Nails.Black ChokerSilver earrings
byScalerbyExzybyImmortalyabyJadeBoutique
419568597598

Edited 335 time(s). Last edit at 06/10/2017 02:11PM by SoloSoul.

I love these pants, and have since I've seen them.
But I also know that they are in the first pages of the catty. (Page 8)
Same for the top. (Page 2)
And the shoes. (Page 9)
Choker. (Page 2)
Skin (Page 5)
You're still relatively new to Sedulity, but I know from a lot of experience some judges don't always like people using everything from the first 20 pages in the catalog.
And I agree with them. You pick your whole outfit in the first 20 pages, it's not very creative. It also doesn't show that time and effort were put into and outfit trying to piece together other clothing items.
And this is such a basic outfit, it's cute but with those pants, I want to see more from this outfit.
The pants are crazy and out there, and could create some cool outfits if paired with the right pieces of clothing.
This is cute, but I want to push you to explore the catty more and see what else you can do with these pants.
I want to see a resub, with the shirt replaced and the accessories.
Explore and have fun.
I hope I'm not being too harsh.

B+

I don't mind if it were in the first pages of catty... As long as they do not wear duplicates that are very recently post.
I do agree with Emerald that you should try a bit more of your creativity to fit with its pants.
I feel the choker is a little random for this submission due to the style of choker.

B+

Don't ask for a resub because of product placement in the shop. We're all guilty of using things from the first pages. I've done it after noticing things that just...work together. Dreta is right. ...And make no mentions of lack of creativity, please. It's something that has changed since I took back ownership of the group, but I dislike any member feeling disregarded as plain and unimaginative.

I do like this, though I don't really care for the choker and feel that she could use bracelets (or something to that effect) instead. And the model is the same as the last submission. In Sedulity, it's important to experiment and use different head/skin combinations. Use another dev for the skin, another hair, and expand a bit. Otherwise, I'd say that this is a very nice outfit. I think it's optional if you want to change the top, but at least make the outfit feel a little more finished.

B+

I wasn't really aware of their pages at all because I found it differently than just going through the catalog (Through wishlit, the recommended items that seem to show at the bottom, search words). The shoes I had already owned and I hadn't used them before. As for the skin, I do usually search up the developer, Henna. To find chokers, I simply searched that up. So none of those did I really just go through the first few pages to find, I just try my best at finding pieces and it really does take me a while on finding things. Not from a lack of creativity.

I want to apologize. I haven't been a part of Sedulity in two years. A lot has changed. I guess it's not always from lack of creativity. But I wasn't completely saying that I wanted a resubmit because of placement. I was saying I wanted a resub because the pants are out there, a different shirt (maybe) and some more fitting accessories would make this outfit better and bring those pants to the spotlight. You may not have to replace the shirt, maybe just some more fitting accessories. (I had issues with an old member for using items from the first few pages and it caused drama, but ways have changed now and that is evident. (Thanks iMoo for that, things are much better now)). Once again, I apologize.

I agree about the choker being too much here
Definitely change up the model a bit, we like to see variations in hair skin head and all stuff to make each outfit unique
I have to agree the shirt isn't working so well with me, the pattern on the shirt plus the triangles with the mesh seem to clash with the clean line pattern of the pants

B+

I agree with iMoo and Lydiann

B+

B+
88.33 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : 1808           |
|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16     : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful     : 1991           |

Note: This submission was declined early;
Despite having just 2 judges, there were 4 B+ grades.

2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1900.

Resub Granted

B+
88.33 %


4 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16     : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful     : Judge          |

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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

 Rachel.. Sara - SFO
byBalorbyZephyr
663647

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Zahra blackM Nanda EyebrowCocoa EyesMeg | Head
byJavabyMizzebyRoybyHenna
663609499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

$ Marakesh Top$ Circus Pants R$ Cold as ice
byEreyabyCarolinebyMissC
598554660

Accessories

ScalerNailsNecklacesEarrings

Hand Scaler 65% Fall Nails.SILVER NECKLACESilver earrings
byScalerbyExzybyNicolaebyJadeBoutique
419568576598

I like this. The shirt compliments the pants more than the other one did.
This is cute.

A

This is a lot better, good job

A