June 10, 2017, 1:50 pm

Outfit Items: View
Description: Night wear outfit
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Contradic
Ren | 50
by
Stessy
by
Henna
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663
690
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
Head
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[Hair] Julia Bla
s. brows LD | bl
LVB| Foz.
| Real face size
$ Maya
by
Yalla
by
Silence
by
lDB
by
Volvo
by
Seliv
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663
499
485
599
1042
Clothes
TopShoes
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~A: Rebecca RLL
$ Kim K, Heels
by
lllAdrianalll
by
Caroline
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679
554
Accessories
ScalerScaler
Scaler
Actions
Actions
Body Columns
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Combo Scaler S85
Foot Scaler
Leg Scaler 115%
Leg Width
Small Waist, Lon
A ~ Shoulder 90%
by
Scaler
by
Scaler
by
Ori
by
Scaler
by
Anarch
by
bianajade
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448
598
499
698
698
619
Animated Magic
Dainty Hands
Face Paint
EyeLashes
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Full Body Light
$ Daddy Nails
. eyeliner
Pabllo Vittar La
by
Lisyc
by
Essme
by
Zephyr
by
Koye
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499
554
609
719



June 11, 2017, 2:06 am
The proportions are way off here. Never scale your legs. You are wearing two leg scaler - remove both. You are also wearing two shoulder scalers. One alone and another in a combo-pack. The most common and the most recommended combo-scaler is 90-100-75, which means 90% shoulder, 100% arm-width and 75% hands. You should never scale your arm width. The feet are also completely fine without the feet-resizer, because now they're too small.
Away from the proportions, the bodylight is not neccessary here as it doesn't affect the outfit in any way than making the prize of the full avatar more expensive. You should never submit a submission with posepacks, bodylights etc etc.
You are also mixing silver and gold which is a no-go. She got silver ''clips'' on her shoes, and gold rings on her fingers. She is also very bare. You should probably add a bracelet or two, and a necklace. Maybe earrings aswell? Up to you, but don't mix metals. It usually brings down the grade.
B+
Away from the proportions, the bodylight is not neccessary here as it doesn't affect the outfit in any way than making the prize of the full avatar more expensive. You should never submit a submission with posepacks, bodylights etc etc.
You are also mixing silver and gold which is a no-go. She got silver ''clips'' on her shoes, and gold rings on her fingers. She is also very bare. You should probably add a bracelet or two, and a necklace. Maybe earrings aswell? Up to you, but don't mix metals. It usually brings down the grade.
B+
June 13, 2017, 8:15 pm

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Pjush    : Judge | | B+ : iMoo     : Judge | | B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge |