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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Veronica Avatar mm. NewYearsDay 
bySinderellabyMissMaya
3899499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

mm. Carissi Silks| LuaBrows KD. mm. Jewel. DBlue!T! Valerie Head
byMissMayabyScarlingbyMissMayabyChicByTrinity
661554499996

Clothes

1 DuplicateShoes

[MT] Kathryn - S[MT] Kathryn San
byMissMayabyMissMaya
620572

Accessories

ScalerScalerNecklacesDainty Hands

Shoulder Scaler !Perfect Hand Scmm. Eternal - Gomm. Dreamy - Rin
byScalerbyVioleta_42571byMissMayabyMissMaya
448389575609

Edited 3201 time(s). Last edit at 07/30/2017 05:00PM by Guest_SedulityGrader15.

Again, it's only a matter of adding that tag onto the title. But good job on following bundle rules.
For future reference, just really try to avoid duplicates on one-pieces/dresses like this. You can check dups by clicking the link above the picture. If it looks too similar, then you'll need to do a lot of changing or you'll need to find a new outfit to work around. This mesh, in particular, has a lot of derives that have similar styles to this dress, even if it's not the same color scheme (checked here).
Anyway, I do like this version more; not sure if it's too similar, but I'm leaning more towards no? Both use gold accessories, but you dressed casually and the original is more dressed up. Speaking of accessories, though, I like that you went for simplicity, but I don't think the necklace or rings are very in-theme with the outfit. Maybe going for a beachy approach would help more. I wouldn't mind seeing a bracelet thrown in there, too, personally.
Finally, the head also appears small, so a head scaler might be in order. Really diggin the head/skin combo though; she's pretty.

B+

Thanks for letting me know! That's so cool lol. I had no idea that when you clicked on duplicate, that it showed the other outfuts that were made with it. What a neat feature for this site. I could just cancel this entry and make a fresh new one. I've been working on a bunch.

I agree with iMoo, I think the hair/head combo is weird, but that may be because of the head size.

B+

The biggest issue for e here is the quality of the skirt, it's incredibly pixelated
The chains holding up the shirt are blurry and super flat
I don't think this should be on the site, let alone twice
I do think you should try the link iMoo provided and find a better quality version of this outfit and make a revamp rather than a a resub since you have a nice base going on

B-

Agree with all the above.
I think the best option would be a revamp.

B-