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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

 Oriana.. plastic surger
byBalorbyZephyr
333647

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Lindsay RichPoderous BrowsC| Hazel - RMy Head + Lashes
byPrimbyKoyebyCaturrdaybyPrim
7736984991097

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Camo Chic OversiBack Zipper RLLmm. T.Boots (blk
byPrimbyPrimbyMissMaya
708774609

Accessories

ScalerActionsActionsEarringsSkins & TattooEyeLashes

Combo Scaler S85Small Waist, CurShoulder Scale 9Panie Earrings Freckles.C| Doll Lashes
byScalerbyAnarchbyXLadyLoyaltyXbyWhimsbyXiubyCaturrday
448698564636650757

This breaks the rules; the top and bottoms must be by different developers unless submitting as a bundle. Bundle rules: the outfit should consist of top and bottoms, as well as shoes or hair. You have that covered. But then it also requires two extra items, so you're missing one.
Personally, I think you'd be better off changing this to a normal submission. The top and bottoms both lack in quality imo, but if I had to pick which one you should change, it would definitely be the pants.
Otherwise, it's only a matter of fixing her proportions. You don't need two shoulder scalers, but her shoulders should be 90%. No arm scalers and at least 65% for the hands. The small waist product can also mess with proportions, and I think that RLL definitely doesn't need to be scaled anymore, so I'd suggest removing it.
Not a bad start, though. With some new bottoms and fixed proportions, this will be really nice imo.

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