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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Monaya Alejandra Skin 
byDrollbyShicuki
663609

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesEyesHead

|Yanua BrownKIKI|UpsetSoftBr - eyes Hazel <.Animated Eye Higx Perfect Rowan 
byMrsKittybyFreakyKikibyElayosbyRoybyM0nys
663587499400964

Clothes

TopShoes

*s.H* Kebaya |-Dmm. Osaira Heels
byx4zur4byMissMaya
1571609

Accessories

Dainty HandsFace PaintEyeLashesHair FlowerChokers

S| Perfect Hands[H] Belle LipstaLashes{A} R | Flower iYutsuko Choker
byPlayersbyHeartagramby2G3th3RbyAnnistybyFatalInstinct
499850631415554

Edited 244 time(s). Last edit at 06/25/2017 04:00PM by Guest_SedulityGrader15.

I can see the appeal of showing off different variations of your products, but try not to upload several similar outfits in a row. Sedulity is about variety, so we try to make the looks as different as we can while submitting. Everything I stated in the other submission applies here regarding accessories, scalers, makeup, and nails.
However, I also feel that the shoes are too light for this outfit. You might be better off using black or a darker tan/nude that matches the nude details in the top. Then carry it through the outfit with something like a clutch or purse, nails, etc. They look more apricot than anything atm. The choker also seems a little more suitable this time around, so it's only a matter of carrying out that theme with the rest of the outfit. Maybe via a ring or something to that effect. Not a bad start, though.

B+

Agree with iMoo
I dont see the need for the flower
I definitely agree on needing better shoes here
The choker seems fitting, but the silver clashes with the slight gold color of the outfit, so I think a solid black or one with a color to match the color pops of the outfit would work better

B+

I agree with what has been said. I also think the skin/head combo is a bit too immature for this, same with the eyesbrows. They all give a kawaii look, when this outfit isn't.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16     : Judge          |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |

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