June 20, 2017, 1:10 am

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Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Irriginal
. Lia - Baddie
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Stessy
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Miru
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334
537
Head & Face
HairEyes
Head
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Deresa Black
C| Hazel - R
B.Julia Head
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Pookie
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Caturrday
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Baunce
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661
499
1097
Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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Bling Beige
A|M Leya Pants
Parys Boots
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Evadon
by
Amishar
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Whims
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575
664
664
Accessories
ScalerScaler
Facial Jewelry
Gloves
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Shoulder Scaler
Head Scaler 110%
$ Gold Nose Ring
Nails + Rings Re
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Scaler
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Scaler
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Essme
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uv
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Edited 197 time(s). Last edit at 06/25/2017 01:45PM by Guest_SedulityGrader15.
June 20, 2017, 10:19 am
I'm not really sure what direction you're attempting to take this in, but the top and shoes are clashing and neither one really feel like they're working with the pants. I think you could possibly pull the shoes in with a more appropriate top. In the very least, they would be more forgivable.
And again, the head scaler has to go. Her head is too big for her body atm. She's even a little shapeless on the hips, so perhaps a 110 hip scaler would help...even though that particular detail is for you to decide.
After the top is changed, it's really only a matter of following through with accessories. Try to make this look coherent with a nail color that matches the outfit, or even a french nail. Or give her red lips to spice it up a bit. (Layerable makeup can do wonders.)
B+
And again, the head scaler has to go. Her head is too big for her body atm. She's even a little shapeless on the hips, so perhaps a 110 hip scaler would help...even though that particular detail is for you to decide.
After the top is changed, it's really only a matter of following through with accessories. Try to make this look coherent with a nail color that matches the outfit, or even a french nail. Or give her red lips to spice it up a bit. (Layerable makeup can do wonders.)
B+
June 24, 2017, 6:46 pm
Yeah I'm not sure about this one
None of the clothing is working together
I agree a black top would hopefully bring in the shoes a bit
This desperately needs better accessories
Head scaler isnt needed
The read nails dont match, and you've used them in all your submissions
You've also used the same head and skin in all your submissions and that's not gonna fly in the main group, so you should try mixing in a couple new products
B+
None of the clothing is working together
I agree a black top would hopefully bring in the shoes a bit
This desperately needs better accessories
Head scaler isnt needed
The read nails dont match, and you've used them in all your submissions
You've also used the same head and skin in all your submissions and that's not gonna fly in the main group, so you should try mixing in a couple new products
B+
June 25, 2017, 1:40 pm
Nothing goes here. The nose ring and nails seem to be a default accessories for you, but they need to go. I think the shoes and pants could work here if you went with a monochrome type outfit here.
Also, try different avis.
B+
Also, try different avis.
B+
June 25, 2017, 1:45 pm

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : iMoo         : Judge | | B+ : LYDIANN16    : Judge | | B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge |