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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

!K Upset.Y| Jade - Hot Ch
byKeliebyYadira
333517

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

(KM)Mcnair BlackEyebrows  CoupleColorful eyeFEMALE HEAD + EY
byKRYSMOONbyeWR3CKDbyWllLokibySabrina082
673444554980

Clothes

TopTopBottom1 Duplicate

Tattoo Arm Marce Slank {Tease T Shorts Tattoo Romm. BoraBora Fee
byWllLokibySexyCDollbyWllLokibyMissMaya
664598774581

Accessories

ScalerDainty HandsSpice GlassesSkins & TattooNecklacesFace Paint

Hand Scaler InkedQueen NailGold Heart ShadeCross Tattoo FacNecklaces InitiaDiamond Lip
byScalerbyDexybyWakabyWllLokibyWllLokibyWllLoki
698598649587669691

Edited 125 time(s). Last edit at 06/30/2017 12:38PM by iMoo.

Try not to let your mouse hover over the avi when you're taking pictures, or it just highlights it like in the first screenie.
This is an interesting submission; I like the top and shorts, but none of the accessories are cohesive or compliment the clothing imo. You could technically keep the feet the same, but I personally think that shoes would work better for this.
For accessories, it's important not to mix metals (silver and gold); stick with one. The dog tags, hat, and sunglasses aren't contributing to the outfit imo. And you can't see the earrings, so there's no point in them being there.
So it's only a matter of cleaning this up and accessorizing a little better. Nice start, though.

B+

How long do I have to wait for the grade?

The other judges need to start posting their grades; it will depend on them. I'll send a reminder, though.

I agree with all that iMoo said. Cleaning it up and choosing appropriate accessories that fit the outfit better would be good.


B+

iMoo covered everything
The top+bottoms are good, but i'd like to see new shoes, maybe some nice sandals to match the summer feel of the clothing
There's a lot of accessories that dint match here, so just clean up everything and this should be passable
Dont forget to stick to one color of accessories

B+

You need to wait for the final grade to be posted. That is posted after the judges post a few critiques.

I agree with everyone. I also think there's an overload of accessories here, and it may be because none of it goes together or matches (gold+silver). It's overwhelming. Also a shoulder scaler is needed here. I think the hat/hair combo should be changed here, the hat isn't the best quality, and some sort of updo imo, would help bring this outfit together.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B+ : seksigirliie  : 1571           |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16     : Judge          |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1571.

Resub Granted