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Description: Sorry for the klitches, it was hard time to find avi that fits this kimono top.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

!K Elettra.+ sanshi
byKeliebyElfe
663609

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Soo HyunKim K. Browssays the blind m!0 Cathy No Lash
byYuuasabyPookiebyBurpbySnuskig
773884444987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Kimi Short GA!A long black sk[K] Blk Kunoichi
byDeeviibyKalaAnnelbyKagato
818561998

Accessories

ScalerActionsDainty HandsFace Paint

Hand Scaler 75%Shoulder Extende[bq]Lotus Man/DiH. Assassin Tatt
byScalerbyItalianMadebybaraqbyHalls
419585774609

The glitches aren't too bad, they aren't really noticeable. A lot of meshes are hard to find avis for so they won't glitch. My major complaints are the face tattoos and the fingers, they're really random and don't really fit this look. She's a bit plain accessory wise but I don't think she needs a lot since the top is made the way it is.

A-

I agree with Frightful about the facetattoo and the nails. You are also not wearing any eyelashes, though it doesn't look too bad with the skin you chose, but you should normally always have some kind of lashes on, otherwise you will get downgraded as you are leaving the model looking odd without eyelashes. I also agree about the fact that you are plain accessory wise, and both your top and skirt have bad quality. I'd like to see a resub where you fix these issues, and try to change either top or skirt to something with better quality.

B

I agree with everything that was said above. The hands and face are random, not sure why you picked them? I think you can find other accessories to bring this all together. I'm also unsure about the quality of the top. I just would like to see more of those Japanese elements to tie this together and make this more ethnic.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : Frightful     : Judge          |
|          B  : Pjush         : Judge          |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |

Resub Granted