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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Hidden Nina Goth Skin
byBiochasebyLisyc
773554

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

M' Stany PoP DonNO BROW. Watter Clear Nina Goth Mesh
byM0nysbyMrsJaaaazybySindrobyLisyc
6613344441372

Clothes

TopShoes

K|MidnightBeauty$ Fuzzy Slippers
byKisaTheCutiebyAmore
675686

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerEarringsEarringsTails

Leg Scaler ThighCombo Scaler S85Head Scaler 85%A Shadowless LigEmme EarringsCat / Monster Li
byScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyKeodibyEvareebyM0nys
419448419399592654

Cat EarsChokersChokersActionsFace PaintFur

Cat Ears Black Lx Black Choker MEmme Choker Waist Cincher 9#NEW ME Black Fur 
byM0nysbyM0nysbyEvareebyOribyYuuasabyNahty
544548598499801620

New Acces.GlovesBlindfolds

 Flying Butterfl[Anry] Herne Glo Daddy Bandage
byNahtybyAnrybyNahty
620664554

Sedulity.~

This is a very different style from what i'm used to, so i'm not really sure how to grade it in terms of style, but that aside, that are some thing that need to be fixed.

For proportions here in Sedulity we recommend 90-95% shoulders, no arm scalers, and 65-70% hands.

Regarding the avatar you have chosen, it makes too much glitches, especially with the arms.

You have a lot of products that aren't needed, and are only adding to the cost of the outfit. That being, the " Waist Cincher 9" (removing it the everything looks the same; i don't thing the head scaler is need, like this the head looks too small; and i don't think the butterflies are needed either, you already have too much stuff. You have two chokers, you only need one.

You also don't need the "A Shadowless Light", you are supposed to use a shadowless room to take the *hiresnobg, and not to wear a shadowless product. That is one of the rules, so pay attention to that.

Regarding the outfit, i like how all the furs are matching, but i'm not sure the dress fits the rest of the look you are going for. The dress is more fancy and girly than the rest, but like i said, this type of style is not my speciality.

B+

I agree with Chana. The idea you were going for in terms of 'neko' style wasn't bad, but the dress isn't suited for it imo. You should remove all of those unnecessary accessories and rethink the shoes and boa. If you want to try another neko submission, it's best to be used in a different submission. Opt for some better matching shoes and try to find more mature things for the dress.
Edit: Lowering grade for final.

B

This looks like a personal outfit, so these critiques may seem harsh, but they are to help you. A lot of outfits like this are those that we all like to wear in client with a bunch of accessories. But for the purpose of creating outfits for Sedulity, it's best to keep everything more calm and toned down, and make sure that everything has a purpose.
Edit: Lower grade in hopes it grades quicker.

B

Agreed with the ladies above.
/Edited - Lowering the grade for the bot to grade it decline faster.


B

Agreed with the ladies too
Edit: low grade to qualify faster

B+

Agreed with Chana, Moo and Emer.

B+

Bump! This is from July and still needs grading!!

B
86.35 %


4 judges have voted, the judge average was 85.83 % ( B )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : llChana       : Judge          |
|          B  : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B  : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |
|          B  : Dreta         : Judge          |
|          B+ : carlosbueno1  : 1502           |
|          B+ : Xetaaa        : 1131           |

Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1317.

Resub Granted