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Ashana. Selfish
byStassybyMiru
773499

Head & Face

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|Grociela Black-AK- Freya Browsmm. Ardent BrownNadia HD/BL/NB
byMrsKittybyAnnieKMZbyMissMayabyAmiraErros
6635544991207

Clothes

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$ RLL MustardD. H. Yellow Pum
byToniebyiDezzBanks
697664

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Combo Scaler S90!A | Matte White[ay] white chokeITiger Belt Bag 
byScalerbyAcelynbyayszuhbyIZIS
448655499884

I'm actually a little surprised that you didn't choose to wear a bracelet or two in this submission. The belt is doing little in terms of accessorizing and there isn't a lot of white being pulled throughout the outfit imo. Not super sure how I feel about bronze/gold against yellow, either, but it's just one detail. I do like the model you used.

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I agree with iMoo, but I actually think it's a bigger issue... There's SO MUCH yellow in this - and it's just straight yellow. There's no pattern or transition or variance. Just yellow. It's really overwhelming to look at, especially because you don't break it up, at all.

I honestly think you could change the shoes to be white, and could work more accessories into the outfit. It would make a ton of difference with the look.

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