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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

AviaWoops
byGokilbyHenna
499691

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

Kourtney White BC| Hazel Dream Girl
byPookiebyCaturrdaybyHairSalon
6634991097

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

E! Kiss Me.D. Ooh Lala P. Rx White Platform
byExzybyiDezzBanksbyM0nys
554664598

Accessories

ScalerNew Acces.Dainty HandsEarringsWatchesChokers

Combo Scaler S85Nose Piercing Anchored Nails90's Solitaire Diamond WatchD. Pink Oh Lala 
byScalerbyKoyebyDexybyKloebyTuhotabyiDezzBanks
448499598586599609

Edited 514 time(s). Last edit at 07/30/2017 08:40PM by iMoo.

You posted a lot of pictures with a lot of glitches, while the avatar that you choose doesn't have that type of glitches. That being said, if you want to display your outfit in different poses, try to find better poses that enhance your outfit and doesn't prejudice it, like this do.

Regarding the outfit, i like it, is cute. But some accessories that you choose weren't the best choice. All the details that you have in here are silver, but you chose nails that have gold rings. Usually we recommend people to match their metals, and in this case it will make the acessories more cohesive if you opte for silver rings. Also, you have a diamond watch in a casual outfit, which doesn't make much sense.The earrings are glitching a lot with the hair, so i would try to find ones that didn't.

Lastly, but very important : your proportions, they are a bit small. We recommend 90-95% shoulders, 65-70% hands, and we do not scale the arms.

Try to pay more attention to the details of the outfit that you are creating, especially when it comes to accessories.

B+

I agree with Chana, but you're off to a nice start.

B+

I agree with Chana as well.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : llChana       : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |

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Description: sedulity










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

AviaWoops
byGokilbyHenna
444691

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

Kourtney White BC| Hazel Dream Girl
byPookiebyCaturrdaybyHairSalon
6634991207

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

E! Kiss Me.D. Ooh Lala P. Rx White Platform
byExzybyiDezzBanksbyM0nys
554664598

Accessories

ActionsActionsDainty HandsWristbandsNew Acces.Earrings

Hand Resizer*M* Shoulder Res$ Chrome Nails PDolly Pink Fur WNose Piercing24K Diamond Stud
byScalerbyMolebyEssmebyKingKyliebyKoyebyYalla
698499576521499565

Chokers

D. Pink Oh Lala 
byiDezzBanks
609

The hands are too big here now. 65% is best, sometimes 70%. While the accessories are more cohesive here, I don't think the pink fluffy cuffs are doing it. They are just too much here. That and they add a different level to this outfit, which isn't where the rest of this outfit is at. Also with how mature you're trying to make this outfit look, the face with the baby hairs on it make her look younger. Some of this I didn't mention before, and I'm sorry. The more I look at it now, the more I'm seeing. I don't mind the pants/top/shoes together, but the rest here doesn't quite go together. Another thing, the eyebrows could be a blonde or a brown and not so dark as they are here. It looks weird. And maybe it wouldn't be as weird if the baby hairs weren't just blended onto the forehead.
I think the accessories could be replaced. The chocker with like a heart necklace, to go with the pants and shirt theme that's going on. And just a simple bracelet could do it.
Good job, but this still needs some more work.

B+

I agree with Emerald regarding the accessories. The hair is a tad odd imo, too, but I never mind seeing black eyebrows with platinum/bleached hair, so I think that's more of a personal preference. Overall, much better...just mind the tones of whatever colors you're matching in your submissions. Too many shades can clash and take away from the cohesiveness.

A-