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Avatars & Skin

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!K Elysa. Anna Skin |S|
byKeliebyShicuki
663609

Head & Face

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Msg MissMaya fors. brows LD | blmm. Ardent BrownKARLI HEAD
byCasualbySilencebyMissMayabyAibu
663499499987

Clothes

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 Tricot Wine 1.Leather RL$ Live fast, die
byExzybyBermudabyMissC
609664660

Accessories

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*M* Shoulder Res!S! Hand Resizer[X] Short Wine{G} Bow Choker
byMolebySandyzPassionbyXpicybyGoo
499598556459

This also doesn't fit the edgy theme

I think I can see what you're going for regarding the theme. To use some 'different' products that you wouldn't expect to pair with other things? But this is far too subtle. You're going to need to get a bit more outrageous with the accessories and clothing; don't be afraid of overcrowding and mixing it up a bit. Leather pants with a cardigan don't quite cut it.
As for the current outfit, I think this is nice, but the bow choker looks out of place to me, personally, and I'm not sure how to feel about the top with the rest of the outfit. If you resubbed this, then maybe you could change the top, add some edgy appeal with makeup, hair, accessories, etc. But as a casual submission, it's worth an A- to me; I think I'd rather see the pants changed to another fabric in that case.

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I'm not much into the edgy theme, so I look for it on the web and found so many different things and looks, I tried to have some ideas of what Edgy is, thank you for your advise and comments I'm learning a lot here with you

I like this outfit, i think is well put together.
I don't mind this cardigan with the pants.

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