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Description: Few of my own product, but not intentional. First submission so hopefully its good. Sedulity










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

| Index, Satto Req
bySitUpbyHydrah
664409

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

rz. Axel Cream!! Theory S2c EyDamien Eyes| Jawline
byRedezbyZeibyRoybySitUp
697553399993

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

| Supreme and boLight Jeans DestYeezy
bySitUpbyZeabyMrVibe
664718697

Accessories

New Acces.GlovesScalerScalerScalerRings

SKA| Head BandanPerfect HandHand Scaler 87.5Foot Shoe ScalerHead Scaler 115%/su/ BLACK ONYX 
bySkabyCassandrabyScalerbyScalerbyScalerbysugarysun
734630419419419825

MiscellaneousEar Plugs

!S! Black septum| Small black pl
bySitUpbySitUp
553619

This is a nice submission. Normally, we aim to use shoulder scalers and avoid head scalers. I get that it's different for male avatars since they have broader shoulders, but this guy looks just a bit top-heavy. Otherwise, no complaints from me.

A

Agree with Moo about the proportions.
But, to me the jacket doesn't have enough quality. The black is solid, no texture at all, and the logo is very blurry.
Other than that, good job. I think it needs to be changed.

B+