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Shenaht. cleo(n)latte 
byFamabyThit
773664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHeadHead

-J- Kourtney pha$ No EyebrowsC| HazelScaler Head 90%  Mariko
byJavabyThitbyCaturrdayby4libySeuchi
663345499389860

Clothes

TopTopBottomShoes

| Glam x Bustier(Draped Leather [Night] Sexy LeaGOLD
byMaerticebyMarthabyNightbyLizDiBencci
664653664649

Accessories

ScalerScalerEyeLashesEyeLashesActionsDainty Hands

Combo Scaler S95Combo Scaler H90A. NudeEyel.&BotC| Doll Lashes10% Pouty Exp.$ Simple Nails
byScalerbyScalerbyAwensbyCaturrdaybyHyrabyEssme
448448599757686554

Face PaintEarringsSpice GlassesChokers

$ Eyeliner 2( little hoops )$ My Brows!D. Simple Choke
byEssmebyMarthabyAmorebyDashing
6095541017698

I like this outfit; I think that you did a nice job matching golds and accessorizing. My issues are with the proportions and all of those unnecessary products. The 10% pout, eyelashes, and eyeliner need to go. It might be a little tougher to find layerable makeup that works with heads that aren't derived from KD meshes, but the top eyelashes hover way too noticeably over the head and the eyeliner does the same thing to a lesser extent. The bottom lashes seem to be the only thing that works. If it's too much of a hassle to change the makeup, then maybe the better solution is to change the head.
As for the proportions, there are standard scalers that we suggest. Don't scale arms or legs...shoulders should be 90-95% and hands should be 65-70%. With this submission, I actually don't see much of a problem with the hip/leg/foot scaler, but the shoulders do look really broad even without the layerable jacket imo. It maybe due to the fact that you're using a head scaler. So you should definitely remove it.

B+

I agree with Moo.

B+

I agree with iMoo

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful     : Judge          |

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Shenaht. cleo(n)latte 
byFamabyThit
773664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHeadHead

-J- Kourtney pha$ No EyebrowsC| HazelScaler Head 90%  Mariko
byJavabyThitbyCaturrdayby4libySeuchi
663345499389860

Clothes

TopTopBottomShoes

| Glam x Bustier(Draped Leather [Night] Sexy LeaGOLD
byMaerticebyMarthabyNightbyLizDiBencci
664653664649

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerEyeLashesActionsDainty Hands

Hand Scaler 65%Combo Scaler H90Shoulder Scaler A. NudeEyel.&Bot-A- Permanent Ex$ Simple Nails
byScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyAwensbyUltrabyEssme
419448448599399554

EarringsSpice GlassesChokers

( little hoops )$ My Brows!D. Simple Choke
byMarthabyAmorebyDashing
5541017698

Remember to go back and edit the title of the original submission so judges know this needs grades. I can do it for you this time.
Nice job cleaning this up! I still believe that the head scaler wasn't needed, but I think that's it.

A

The head seems too small. I feel like the color of the lips aren't very flattering with the rest of the outfit.
A gold bracelet would have been nice.

A-