August 18, 2017, 10:10 am

Outfit Items: View
Description: bullied
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Colin.
. Bloody Skin
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Balor
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Sinder
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663
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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Thinq Black
. Kuro Bushy Bro
Shattered II
. Bloody MH
by
Lindt
by
Meya
by
Roy
by
Sinder
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664
698
399
1207
Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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Blake Top & Jack
Distressed Jean
Converse
by
RaniRellix
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Raters
by
TisntMe
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565
563
598
Accessories
ScalerScaler
Gloves
Glasses Kings
Ear Plugs
Bracelets
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Foot Shoe Scaler
Combo Scaler S90
Zrk! Perfect Han
Owl Vintage Glas
MY EARS
True .
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Scaler
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Scaler
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Zarehk
by
ewo
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BUK
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Sexy
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August 19, 2017, 3:49 pm

Edit: I really don't mean to grade harshly when it comes to it, but I just feel like a resub is necessary here because this could be executed better with a different head+skin combo and different accessories. It's not to be mean by any chance, so I'm sorry if you feel that way, it's just because I know that this can be improved. If he was being bullied, you'd think its at a school, so maybe even dress like it, or give it a theme to match. - Please don't take my criticism to heart like that, it's not my intention. However, I'm still sticking to my grade. I know this can be better. Please just consider my critique.
B+
August 20, 2017, 11:42 am
I agree with Angel, you also need to remember not to scale your arms. The jeans also don't have the best texture.
B+
B+
August 21, 2017, 9:37 am
The bloody nose is a personal preference at this point. It's a 'thing' on imvu to have them, so people like them. Others don't. It also says 'bullied' in the description, so I'm just going to go out on a limb here and say that he's supposed to look beat up/bloody.
A B+ for a bloody skin and some earrings that don't show through the hair. That's not right. Rethink your grades for me, please.
A
A B+ for a bloody skin and some earrings that don't show through the hair. That's not right. Rethink your grades for me, please.
A