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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkinSkin

 Macky!! Luchador Owl Neck Tattoo
byFapfapsbyZeibyRaters
444698476

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 Nicholas Black.Zayn Eyebrows(I bet you are)Hipster
byRatersbyGreinerbyRoybyGreiner
653553499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Greiner$$$. Balmains x Owl Old Classic 
byGreinerbyGamobyewo
553608553

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerScalerGlovesEar Plugs

Hand Scaler 70%Head Scaler 102.[M] Feet Scaler 120% ScalerB| Freedom/Life !! Black Titaniu
byScalerbyScalerbyJEHZKby2facebyAKHbyPixology
419419499335663697

The avatar resizer really isn't needed; it's more like a personal addition to the submission. Otherwise, the head and feet are a bit too small. Removing the foot scaler and adding a...105-110% head scaler would do the trick imo. Of course, you could also add a 90-95% shoulder scaler since the shoulders are pretty broad atm. 65% is also a bit too small for male hands in Sedulity--we normally recommend 70-80%. Perfect hands or hand glove meshes like the tattoos in this will usually slim them down a little too. Otherwise, the neck corrector isn't really necessary and I don't think the band aid is contributing much to the outfit. Lastly, it's important to take at least one screenshot that shows everything--don't let the feet or hair get cut off if you can help it.
This is a nice submission, so after the proportions are fixed and the bandage is removed, it'll be a lot better imo.
Edit: Thanks for changing this back to the original version. Now you'll know for the future how we like the resubs done. But you did break the rules by changing the submission, so I'm changing my grade.

F

Edited the way you suggested Thanks

F
50 %


1 judge have voted, the judge average was 50 % ( F )

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|          F  : iMoo : Judge          |

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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkinSkin

 Macky!! Luchador Owl Neck Tattoo
byFapfapsbyZeibyRaters
444698476

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 Nicholas Black.Zayn Eyebrows(I bet you are)Hipster
byRatersbyGreinerbyRoybyGreiner
653443499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Greiner$$$. Balmains x Owl Old Classic 
byGreinerbyGamobyewo
553608553

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerScalerGlovesEar Plugs

Hand Scaler 70%Head Scaler 102.[M] Feet Scaler 120% ScalerB| Freedom/Life !! Black Titaniu
byScalerbyScalerbyJEHZKby2facebyAKHbyPixology
419419499335663697

The proportions are better this time. The avatar scaler is still unnecessary, but...this is an improvement.

A

Very nice!
I like this

A