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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Estelle Still v.Tianna, Donatell
bySinderellabyYadira
773554

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Obaniu redmm. Sultry KD brmm. Paradigm - OL| Yui I
byJavabyMissMayabyMissMayabyLavere
661554499932

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Suit, bl.[N] RL Black sho��� Boots 
byGautierbyNightbyCredez
774664609

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerRingsDainty HandsSkins & Tattoo

Hand Scaler 75%Leg Thigh ScalerShoulder Scaler [M] Stunner.Ring-MB- Long Black  Gradient Stocki
byScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyMissMayabyMarinaBoiabyZesw
419419448664556663

Longer NecklacFace Paint

.nkk White Gold  Purrfect Yui La
bynikkabyPurrissy
642691

This isn't a bad start, but it needs a few tweaks. I think your head is a bit immature for a look like this, something a little more mature would work better. Yui is a very childish head and it just feels out of place here. Your proportions are almost perfect but I suggest using a hip scaler and not a leg scaler because the 120% is really warping her feet and making them stretch unnaturally. I'm a little iffy on the stockings, I can't decide if I like them or not tbh, they're unique, I just don't know how I feel about them.

B+

I agree with Fright, but I like the stockings. Great first submission, just remember not to go overboard with the legs.

B+

I agree with Frightful aswell.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Pjush     : Judge          |

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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

*VN CleoShaye RLTianna, Donatell
byVisNovabyYadira
883554

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Obaniu redmm. Sultry KD brmm. Paradigm - O!C Undine NoBlen
byJavabyMissMayabyMissMayabyCheSav
661554499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Suit, bl.[N] RL Black sho� Boots 
byGautierbyNightbyCredez
774664609

Accessories

ScalerScalerRingsActionsDainty HandsSkins & Tattoo

Hand Scaler 75%Shoulder Scaler [M] Stunner.RingCombo Scale H110-MB- Long Black  Gradient Stocki
byScalerbyScalerbyMissMayabyScalerbyMarinaBoiabyZesw
419448664448556663

Longer NecklacFace Paint

.nkk White Gold Undine Classic M
bynikkabyPearla711
642583

This is a lot better, good job

A

I agree, nice improvements.

A