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Female avatarNori | Light
byIMVU inc.byHenna
2500691

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HairEyebrowsEyesHeadHead

-J- Varissa blacs| LuaBrows KD. D. Jade Eyes!v| M/F Neck CorrGina | Head
byJavabyScarlingbyiDezzBanksbyVeilbyHenna
663554499850987

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E! Ribbed Lace-UM! Distressed SkE!  Spikes Heels
byExzybyExzybyExzy
598598609

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerDainty Hands

Combo Scaler S80[Night] Leg+thigFor RL sexy Legs.Cst: Wht French
byScalerbyNightbyNightbyDashing
448708618698

Nice first submission, but you need to go back and reread the rules. You need to take your pictures in a shadowless/tintless room. This also breaks the bundle rules, so either the top or bottoms have to be changed or you need to add two more items by Exzy.

I would suggest taking off the leg scalers; they aren't flattering for the shape of your legs and distort the body a bit, especially around the feet. If you think they're really necessary, opt for a combo scaler for hips, legs, and feet. I normally stick with H110L100F100 or H110L110F100. The neck corrector isn't needed either, so that should go. And the shoulders and hands are too small. Normally, we recommend 90-95% shoulders, no arm scalers, and 65-75% hand scalers.
Depending on what direction you wanna take this outfit, I would recommend changing the shoes so that they match the top (they have to be by Exzy and this would have to be submitted as a proper bundle) OR change the top to attempt matching the shoes and bottoms...in which case, it could be a normal submission.
Also, really try to accessorize. A bracelet or some wrist accessory/ies would be a good idea to pull this together. Possibly a necklace, too.

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1 judge have voted, the judge average was 50 % ( F )

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|          F  : iMoo : Judge          |

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GolanNori | Light
byDrollbyHenna
399691

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Varissa blacs| LuaBrows KD. D. Jade Eyes!Gina | Head
byJavabyScarlingbyiDezzBanksbyHenna
663554499987

Clothes

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Black TankM! Distressed SkE!  Spikes Heels
byYmbriabyExzybyExzy
588598609

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ScalerScalerDainty HandsActionsBracelets

Hand Scaler 65%Shoulder Scaler .Cst: Wht FrenchCombo Scale H110SILVER BRACELETS
byScalerbyScalerbyDashingbyScalerbyJadeBoutique
419448698448664

This is much better, and now the pants are more complimented imo. I would still prefer if she had another accessory or two on her (even something small like a nose ring) but even like this, it's a nice submission.

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Much better! I agree that she's still a little bare. I would have liked to see some more accessories to help tie in the spikes on the shoes, actually. But this is a great improvement.

In the future, when you resub, make sure that you go back to change the original post's title to "Submission [Resub] " I'll do it for you this time, though.

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