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MilenaiGeorgina Rose  C.freckles
byStessybyKloebyDrickon
443631664

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HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Julie champaCinnamon Brows. Crystal - Honey!S Alena Head + 
byJavabyClairettebyMissMayabySinfully
6587744991098

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TopShoes

~A: Rebecca RLLGOLD
bylllAdrianalllbyLizDiBencci
679664

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ScalerGlovesEarringsNew Acces.

Combo Scaler S90[Anry] Zadig NaiEarrings$ Fragile
byScalerbyAnrybyEarringsbyMissC
448631467660

Edited 1052 time(s). Last edit at 02/10/2018 03:20PM by Sharlavay.

Fairly nice look. A few things to point out is the hand area feels a little plain, the rings aren't very noticeable and the wrists are pretty bare. I'm also not sure the nails fully match the look. The shoes here also have very little texture to them and are just a patterned pasted on to the shoe. Last thing I think needs addressing is the avatar pose. Remember when outfits are uploaded on to the site they're in a preview box area. I personally do not think this pose is very flattering for the outfit either.

B+

I have to agree with Appa, the shoes have poor quality, and the nails don't really fit the rest. Regarding the pose, i also agree, she looks so elegant, but the pose doesn't.
But i really love her face+skin!
I can see you improve, good job!

B+

I agree with what has been stated above. Good start though.

B+

I agree with Appa, the shoes don't have the best quality and the nails don't match. The pose also isn't very flattering because of the RLL shape. The RLL shape gives her a larger hip/butt area so a lot of poses aren't going to be flattering with this shape.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Appa          : 1353           |
|          B+ : llChana       : Judge          |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful     : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1353.

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Lu)Elegant  AvatGeorgina Rose  C.freckles
byLunaDLuzbyKloebyDrickon
1080631664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Julie champaCinnamon Brows. Crystal - Honey!S Alena Head + 
byJavabyClairettebyMissMayabySinfully
6587744991098

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TopShoes

~A: Rebecca RLLGold Heels
bylllAdrianalllbyWhims
679664

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ScalerBraceletsEarringsDainty HandsNew Acces.

Combo Scaler S90A:: bracelet golEarringsIShiny Nails Mah$ Fragile
byScalerbyAMAZOHNbyEarringsbyIZISbyMissC
448774467785660


I like that you pulled the gold in with the shoes and accessories. I feel the bracelet is a little outdated and doesn't completely match the necklace or shoes in terms of tone or design (might just be me though), but at least it doesn't feel as bare. The new pose is also an improvement, as are the nails.

A

Be careful when you choose metal tone, because there's different shades it's best to keep it similar shade... like the bracelet is dark than other gold tone.
I think it's better to wear a different eyes because it had tears, so I think it's random since she doesn't look sad at all... And maybe a different color since it looks like it's blending in.
I am not sure about the shoes due to its texture, but I think it's passable in my opinion.

A-