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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Poses. Renee - rare
byMzLotzOShotzbyZephyr
385482

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Esther Black Eyebrow. Passion... Taliyah | Head
byPookiebyBytebyMissMayabyXantha
663499555987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

!D! Kayla Tank!Jeans RL~Gw~Linda Nude
byiDezzBanksbyEssmebygejwa
664554609

Accessories

ScalerScalerDainty HandsNecklacesEarrings

Hand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler$ Kylie NailsThin Chain SilveSilver Earrings
byScalerbyvirtuallychalbyEssmebyMsSiciliabyQueenIrish
419696554944597

It is better if you use a different avatar because it looks like it's shrinking your shoulders inside.
Remember do not mix the metal tone... You had gold rings while others are silver. (It is best if you wore gold instead due to the piece of the shoes you are wearing).
I think it would cuter if she was wearing the bracelets as well but that is a minor issue in my opinion.

A-

I can see the reason for using gold or silver since the top uses one and the shoes use another, but I gotta agree with Dreta that it may be better to just pick one and stick with it. The shoes and top match really well, but maybe replacing one wouldn't hurt. I personally am not in love with the quality of the top; mostly the lace and "buttons"
I also have to agree about the avi. It slouches, but that's not such a big deal on its own for me most times. But it's also creating some kind of distortion in one of the armpits and it's a little awkward to look at in client once you notice it.
Hope the grade isn't too harsh, but I personally feel like this could use a little perfecting. I really love the model though, and as usual, you're putting up some really pretty submissions. Nice start!

B+

I agree with Dreta and Moo, and everything they mentioned above(glitches, weird avis, metal mix and dubious item quality) are issues that you should take into consideration before submiting future outfits. However, I don't think this outfit is faulty enough to go for a resub henche my grade.

A-

This has some issues that the critiques above mentioned, but overall i find this really pretty. I don't see a major reason for failing.

A-