May 18, 2018, 11:22 pm

Outfit Items: View
Description: Beach Casual
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Pudding
. Lia - Baddie
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Jate
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Miru
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Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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-J- Vera champag
s| LuaBrows KD.
D. Heterochromia
$ Destiny
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Java
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Scarling
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iDezzBanks
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Maertice
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554
587
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Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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WHITE BEACH TOP
Red Bikini
Beach Party Fee
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Sarai
by
QueenOfTheDam
by
ChicKlass
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658
575
Accessories
ScalerScaler
Dainty Hands
New Acces.
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Hand Scaler 65%
Shoulder Scaler
$ Kylie Nails
Beach Bag
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Scaler
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Scaler
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Essme
by
MsAbbi
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May 19, 2018, 4:29 am
For starters, I really like the model you used, and the idea of the outfit. However it looks a bit mismatched to me, I'd say what throws me off the most is the bag. Top is boho, bottom is pin-up-ish(?) but the color would work well in a boho outfit , the model itself has a nature-child-romatic feel, so I guess a straw colored beach bag would perhaps work better. Also I'd like some accessory too, to give her a more complete look, even if it's something small and descrete in order to keep the casual look. Overall I'd say this is a nice start but it needs a bit more work, and ofc the judges may disagree with me ^_^
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B+
May 19, 2018, 12:09 pm
I am glad that you didn't wear a lot of accessories because we don't really wear it a lot when we are swimming.
I have an issue with the top, white looks blurry.
I feel nude nails is random... (if you wore it due to the lips, I recommend you to have the similar tone). French nails can work.
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