May 23, 2018, 9:45 am

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Description: Taking inspiration from the Gothic theme and including it with a Dominatrix feel, I came up with an outfit that I actually really loved doing. I attempted to make it feel sexy but not too cluttered with over-the-top accessories. The gloves and shoes I struggled with the most; I wanted over the elbow PVC gloves but every mesh glitched horribly with avatars. The shoes were just the same; A simple high heel with a shine was all I wanted-- The struggles.
Avatars & Skin
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Faith
Eliz Matte Light
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Jate
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Koye
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Head & Face
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Ayana Black
Misaki
Denise + Lashes
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MrsKitty
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[DM] Rubber Dres
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Accessories
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Dainty Hands
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Hand Scaler 70%
Shoulder Scaler
Mistress Whip
Earrings
In Silver Collar
[CS] Fetish Glov
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Scaler
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Scaler
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Bracelets
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Koye
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May 23, 2018, 10:38 am
I think since it is a dominatrix outfit, something straight rather than curly would've been better
and if you wanted to keep the hair long you can have the hair moved to the back so the dress can really show.
Also the hair is interfering with your earring.
You are also missing eyebrows for this head.
I think you can find better shoes, like on Deathcamp,
she's got nice pair of black glossed heeled that would fit this outfit well.
I think there is room to make the outfit better, so I'd like to see a re-sub
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May 23, 2018, 10:50 am
I think the default eyebrows on this head work for the outfit, since they're thin and arched / well shaped. And they look as realistic as the other eyebrows in shop imo. The hair feels more like a personal opinion, but I like the style; something pulled back tight fits the dom theme, but I don't think of it as a rule or requirement. Google images will show the same kinds of hairstyles, I'm willing to bet.
I can see what Saje means about the shoes, but they also don't hurt the outfit imo. The style is fitting for someone "uptight" lmao. I see the appeal of platforms ofc, but it's one change that I don't find necessary.
Overall, I think this is a provocative and good looking submission.
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I can see what Saje means about the shoes, but they also don't hurt the outfit imo. The style is fitting for someone "uptight" lmao. I see the appeal of platforms ofc, but it's one change that I don't find necessary.
Overall, I think this is a provocative and good looking submission.
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May 23, 2018, 11:35 am
That dress gave you pain because the original mesh is a long, long sleeved dress so any high gloves would glitch with the invisible part of it. It's also a quite old mesh I think, so its shape is a little akward as are the shadings of the dress, but nothing major. With those struggles I think you managed to pull it off quite well
Also despite agreeing with Sage that generally a straight hairdo fits the dominatrix theme better, I really love the hairstyle you used here.
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May 23, 2018, 11:42 am
Is that why I couldn't use gloves?! Goddamnit. I was looking for ages too. Thank you for catching me up on speed with that! After finding that dress I was against ever changing it lmao.