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AndreaDr. Anye T3
byJatebyDrii
399664

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HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Enara Blacks| LuaBrows KD. honeyTC. Maggie Head 
byMrsKittybyScarlingbyRabibyPhi
6935544441430

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E! Tube Top.Z  Ripped B RLD. Mary Red V.!
byExzybylZannybyiDezzBanks
499609663

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Hand Scaler 65%Shoulder Scaler( Golden Savage ( little hoops )( bracelet set R[Is] Nails Red P
byScalerbyvirtuallychalbyMarthabyMarthabyMarthabyIsmeny
419696545554510499

This could have been played up way more in the casual department.
For instance, the shoes you chose are vans,
you could've done a plaid shirt around the waist or just worn a plaid shirt.
You could also have done a black denim jacket over the tube top.
Which I think you should consider... add something else to the top.
I think the necklace needs to go.
I don't think it's up to par in terms of the quality.
I think you can find better.
Better yet, take off the necklace and emphasize the earrings with some hoops
because your hair style is up in a high bun.
Then adda watch to the wrist.
I also suggest checking out IZIS, she's got better sneakers,
that I think would be nicer because the feet is so small... it's weird to me.
I'd wanna see a resub.

B+

I think I agree with Saje that more could have been done here. The tube top by itself feels a little "lacking" but probably because I'd either want to see jeans that flatter it more instead of divot down further on the stomach (high-waist)--or see some kind of jacket put over it. I wouldn't suggest a waist jacket, though, because I feel like it wouldn't compliment the top so much.
I mostly agree about the shoes. It's nice that you thought to include red nails, but I think you'd need another clothing piece to pull in the red sneakers, personally. As far as accessories go, I'm not sure--I might be okay with the current stuff because the chain and earrings feel modest enough to be casual. The bracelet is kinda iffy there, but I think it'd be okay to keep what you have if you really preferred it that way.
All in all, I like the model and the direction you were taking it. So I hope that a resub helps a lot.

B+

I do agree with the ladies above.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Saje  : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo  : Judge          |
|          B+ : Dreta : Judge          |

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!K Angie.Dr. Anye T3
byKeliebyDrii
663664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Enara Blacks| LuaBrows KD. honeyTC. Maggie Head 
byMrsKittybyScarlingbyRabibyPhi
6935544441430

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. Shara TopZ  Ripped B RLs| Plaid Waist SD. Mary Red V.!
byMissMayabylZannybySavanahbyiDezzBanks
664609686663

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Hand Scaler 65%Shoulder Scaler( Golden Savage ( little hoops )( bracelet set R[Is] Nails Red P
byScalerbyvirtuallychalbyMarthabyMarthabyMarthabyIsmeny
419696545554510499

This is a bit better but I wish you followed Saje's critiques about the hoops and necklace. It would be much better if it was big hoops so it can get along with the hairstyle better because I only felt like you changed top and that's all. I do not feel it's enough to be passable.

Other judges may think it's not big deal, but I think it is when you are wearing a different color of the eyebrows from the hairstyle roots. I think black eyebrows would be much better. I am sorry to not mention it early.

B+

I didn't really take notice to the brows the first time around, but I think it's pretty minor. Overall, this is a good improvement. The new top and waist jacket contributed a lot. I still don't really mind your choice in accessories, though I see what Saje and Dreta mean.

A