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Avatars & Skin

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W. love meMadellene Light!
byWurpsbyKoye
487698

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Niaeria blacNo Eyebrows~ Eyes .B. Right$ Heiress !!
byJavabyEyebrowsbyzaiibyMaertice
663488499987

Clothes

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Feeling Gray. black jeans rl!TX - Waist Jack White Vans
byDyphsbyDacisbyT3XXbyMO
664554587664

Accessories

ScalerScalerNew Acces.Dainty Hands

Hand Scaler 65%Shoulder Scaler $ Zara EyebrowsMegan Nails
byScalerbyScalerbyDeathcampbyEssme
419448719565

Not bad. I wish the shorts you used were blue denims instead of black or the shirt tied to the hip a different fabric or color. I think the shoes should've been different color too. It stands out but it's not bad.

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This is quite a flattering submission with great tones used.
If you had opted for more of a grey show then it would have kept in theme with the monochrome scheme applied here. You could have definitely utilised some form of jewellery, that aren't rings, here be it earrings or a bracelet- It's what is missing to tie the outfit together. I would have opted for studs.
If viewed in client, you can see that the eyebrows are a little too low down and large; The tip meets up and goes through the eyeliner. Maybe something simpler for this type of outfit than a fierce thick brow.

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I do agree with Saje but I don't think it's necessary to change to blue denim shorts.
I do agree with Valeer as well.

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