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Description: Assasin...also an occupation of sorts ;P










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Assassin!P Aries Skin V.
byCryotechbyPrey
718664

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

Paola BlackCool Eyes Blue!! $ D I V A $
byMrsKittybylH20lbyPixology
663444996

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

x Top + Gloves B(Key)Sexy Stocki[Night] Minni Bo
byM0nysbyBetzaDKurtzbyNight
609664664

Accessories

ScalerEarringsNerd Glasses

Combo Scaler S90Earrings|Cartier Frames 
byScalerbyEarringsbySohona
499467664

Edited 528 time(s). Last edit at 07/04/2019 12:53PM by iMoo.

I like the avatar, but we mostly recommended people to use the avatar that can view the front better.
You may try to find a different avatar that is included a sword or use add-on sword either.
It would be much better if the earrings and glasses were silver so it could match the sword better due to metal tone.
You forgot to wear the nails, it's important to use it all the time.
Somehow I feel like it's not assassin enough, I excepted more. I want to see 'bad-ass' but other judges may disagree.
I am not sure about the shirt, I mean it's fit to assassin but it would match the pants instead.
Now I don't know if it would count for the Occupation theme so other judges may speak up for their opinions.

B+

I do not mind the avatar. In fact, I find it goes well with the glasses.
More harshed or emotional eyebrows would have given her more of an assasin look.
The eyes do not concord well with the face and makeup. The pupils could be more dilated.
As Dreta mentionned, she does need nails.
For the earrings, I would have gone with different ones; they do not give me an assassin vibe.
If these corrections are made, I feel this outfit can stand out from the other outfits on the imvuoutfits web site (:

B+

It's been difficult for me to gather some thoughts on this submission. I'm glad that I waited for other grades because they said what I probably couldn't have.

This really is a cool approach to the theme, and while I like the creativity and absolutely adore the avatar holding the katana, I have to agree with Dreta that it's not completely suitable for the site. That issue by itself isn't enough for me to want a resub, obviously. But I also have to agree with Vivace that the eyes don't look quite right. I can see what she means about the eyebrows as well. And like Dreta, I don't know how I feel about the top and bottoms together. One or the other could be changed to make it look a little better. But I think you had the right idea with the long sleeved top.

B+

I agree about the avatar and the bottoms. I don't really mind the eyes though, dilated pupils are a sign of um..being relaxed and comfy, not being about to kill someone Also since this is more of an assassin roleplay, I find that I quite like the model. There is a dual yielding katana avatar in the shop facing the front, you could use this perhaps. As for the bottoms, actual pants with a hint of edgy would do imo.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Dreta   : Judge          |
|          B+ : Vivace  : 1559           |
|          B+ : iMoo    : Judge          |
|          B+ : Quadrus : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1559.

Resub Granted

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Description: I changed a couple of the things that weren't working with this...made her more modern assassin. I had to change the top because it was impossible to add nails with the top; It kept taking the top off for any nails ( that's why I didn't have any nails on the original post). I realized I used the boots for something else before...and was hoping that it wouldn't be that big of a deal since it was only used once...!










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Dual gun v2 . F !P Aries Skin V.
byShinryseobyPrey
465664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Paola BlackD1YA Request !. Destiny - Gaia!! $ D I V A $
byMrsKittybyTyrexbyMirubyPixology
663499399997

Clothes

TopBottom1 Duplicate

x Black Top 2(Key)Sexy Stocki[Night] Minni Bo
byM0nysbyBetzaDKurtzbyNight
549664664

Accessories

ScalerNailsEarringsNerd Glasses

Combo Scaler S90New York Black NEarrings|Cartier Frames 
byScalerbyTommyDbyEarringMeshesbySohona
499543468664

Unexpected change! I regretted saying something about the eyes when I saw that original submission today. It was a cool contrast with the black--especially the shades. But this is really cool too and I think the items are flowing more nicely.
If I had any nitpicks, I'd say I would have enjoyed either a sleek updo or a sexier hairstyle in general. The bun on the top of her head and half-down hair just aren't doing it for me. I don't think it was working well for me in the original submission either but I might not have commented on it because I wasn't sure if it was a personal gripe or not.

PS- If you ever have an issue like with the nails and top again, just let us know in the description if you want to avoid comments on it.

A-

I am very impressed what did you do with resub; it really looks good.
Somehow, I do agree with iMoo about the hairstyle. I apologize I haven't mentioned it from original but a classic hairstyle would pull her look up much better!

A-