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Description: Well I did miss provocative so this is it hope you like.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

{Ash} Diva Pose i need 2 get bet
byAshleyEclipsEbyMiru
771399

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

Danneel PlatinumC| Hazel - RSCARLA Eyebrow+E
byRaniRellixbyCaturrdaybylH20l
6414991318

Clothes

TopBottom1 DuplicateShoes

!D! Veronica Whi| Easy + Tat. RL*W* Hot Pink Bar[Is] Shoes On Ha
byDiDiliciousbySymbologybyWhimsbyIsmeny
620664597554

Accessories

ActionsActionsEarringsVarious MasqueDainty Hands

Shoulder Scale 9%65 Female Hand ~A: Little Gold {VS}Corner Eye H~A: Frenchie Nai
byXLadyLoyaltyXbyIISbylllAdrianalllbyVictoriasSecrbylllAdrianalll
564385650572670

Edited 292 time(s). Last edit at 06/12/2019 05:52AM by Guest_HaloCarter.

This is an interesting start. Generally I want to point out something i've noticed about loads of your fits, you stick to the same head/skin/brows combo, and that's not something advisable since here we try to promote different developers and their products. If you really like the scarla head and you dont want to play with different head meshes, try finding different derivations of this head and not use the same item over and over agian. Now, on this fit, I would have like to see matching nails to the toes, as it is the fuchsia toes have nothing to be combined with plus, it's a duplicate item and that makes it double difficult to be accepted. So, either add up another splash of fuchsia in there or change the toenail color (perhaps to match the haircolor?- dunno I'd do that ) Now on your model, personally, I'd opt for a black model to compliment that amazing hairstyle you found there and the white top.As for accessories, I kind of like how bare she looks, like she's having a walk on the beach. So basically i'd suggest you change the feet/OR find matching nails to that, and construct an avi that would bring out more the attributes of this fit.

B+

I agree with Quad; you should explore more heads and skins. Otherwise, I agree with her about everything else she mentioned. I don't mind the dup on the feet and kinda want you to change the nails that way you're able to also change the bottoms. Maybe other judges disagree, but I don't think the bottoms compliment the top very well...something equally classy/dressy would be ideal, I think. But that top is right on the money if you're aiming for provocative. Nice start!!

B+

The other judges said it all.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Quadrus : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo    : Judge          |
|          B+ : Vivace  : Judge          |

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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

{Ash} Diva Pose Reina
byAshleyEclipsEbyHenna
771692

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Danneel Platinum*CC* Cleire Browmm. Jewel. Grey.*CC* Cleire Head
byRaniRellixbyCCAmorebyMissMayabyCCAmore
641554499988

Clothes

TopBottom1 DuplicateShoes

!D! Veronica WhiE* Aby White Pan*W* Hot Pink Bar[Is] Shoes On Ha
byDiDiliciousbyE5lNbyWhimsbyIsmeny
620626597554

Accessories

GlovesScalerEarrings

*W* Hot Pink NaiCombo Scaler S90~A: Little Gold 
byWhimsbyScalerbylllAdrianalll
582499650

Yaaas girl. This is it. I love the new model and the new pants are great when you think about what she looked like with those shoes on. The pink toes do stick out a lot, but white goes with anything. I would only suggest adding a necklace or larger/dangly earrings, and possibly a bracelet (we might have forgotten to mention that last time).

A

So much better! I agree with the above.

A