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197 + gunLVB | Army of Di
byDobubySunkissed
776884

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Ginnifer #Baby_DNP. Hanna Brows C| Hazel - RNP. Xiamara Head
byYuibyNephembyCaturrdaybyNephem
650499499988

Clothes

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NP. Military TopNP. Military PanNP. Military Boo
byNephembyNephembyNephem
664664663

Accessories

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Shoulder Scale 9%65 Female Hand ScalerCAMOPHAGE  WATCH[L]MillyShadesMilitary Plaque
byXLadyLoyaltyXbyIISby2facebyLola8673bylLeighlbyEtoileNoire
564385448527774505

Gloves With La

Camo Belted Glov
byjohngate13
686

Edited 488 time(s). Last edit at 06/11/2019 08:50PM by Guest_SedulityGrader15.

I love the outfit Halo,
However, a few things.
This should be under the "bundle" category...
Also, your scalers are a little off, I would take off the leg scaler and shoulder scaler, and i would suggest looking for appropriate scalers in shop.

Dont forget shadowless room!


I'm new to "judging" submissions, so wait and see the reviews from more experienced judges!

Best of luck!!


Mod Edit: C's aren't acceptable grades anymore! Please re-familiarize yourself with the grades in the rules thread.

I agree with Sharla about the leg scaler for sure. But it does look like you used a shadowless room, so you're okay on that front.
Anyway, I do like this bundle and the execution of it is pretty nice, though I find myself wishing for a bolder model. Something about her face is very plain-jane to me.
Also, you need to ensure that you read the rules and understand what a bundle is. If you want to be credited for outfits more often on the site, you can't submit bundles. And bundles are made up of all three clothing items (top, bottoms, and shoes (or hair)) plus at least two extra products by that developer.

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Wouldn't want to get in her way D: She looks like she came straight out of a Hollywood movie! I agree with the above.

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